A Wonderful Creation
By poetic2984, 25th Jan 2012 | Follow this author
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There is always someone who creates that feeling and appreciation for beauty.
A Wonderful Creation
There is only one person on whom I can fixed my adoration
And that’s on you such fine assembly of feminine protoplasm
Perhaps the master carefully thought hard and took many long days
To create one with such perfect physical attributes displays
Eyes so beautiful indescribable shade with such an aura so attracting
With a luster that far exceeds freshly cleaved diamond when emitting
And a smile the shows such perfect teeth well places and so immaculate
Displaying such a dental formula any dentist will certainly promulgate
With a body with such curves that seems measure to precision
Only one with divine powers could get those angles in such equal proportion
Oh! Such beauty that who when see would most certainly be pleased
Being privileged to see one of creation’s gems what a masterpiece
But who could I miss such smooth firm and perfect skin
I cannot look because of the quantity of light it is reflecting
But it is quite clear that water with it find it hard to make that contact
Because of its texture will slide off quickly and that’s indeed a fact
There is no end to the number who will be drawn into admiration
Certainly there are many who would get enchanted by such a vision
Wondering where on earth there was such a fine example of human beauty
This would be one that will pose such a problem to those experts in anthropology
There was never a person that exited who displayed such elegance
Whose strides so lithe like that of a very graceful dance?
A walk that shows there is some music only the bearer can hear
Moving to the rhythm and yet no arrogance was there on display
Oh! What beauty such a spectacle of looks that delights
Yes thanks that I am blessed with that wonderful sense of sight
So that I can appreciate you, made exactly by the master’s hand to his plan
Thus demonstrating his magnificence to each and every land.
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25th Jan 2012 (#)
well written! good admiration of beauty but felt a lil chaotic in the middle -- something missing --and something not really fitting!
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25th Jan 2012 (#)
Fine poem but you need to pare it down and check grammar.
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25th Jan 2012 (#)
Fine
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25th Jan 2012 (#)
I always appreciate beauty for any creations...liked it.
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25th Jan 2012 (#)
beautiful write....
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26th Jan 2012 (#)
BEAUTIFUL
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27th Jan 2012 (#)
Poetic: You work hard to bring a poem together. Note the comments above from GV Rama Rao and wordcraze. Together we improve our work every day. I follow your work with great anticipation.
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