First time and the happiest day.
By Minakshi, 24th Jun 2011 | Follow this author
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You made my day so special......giving me something i would die for...Happiest day it turned out to be.....
Happiest Day....
It was so great today
you expressed in such a way,
the feeling stored within
your heart which is my inn.
The heavenly touch you made
for which you deeply prayed,
made me feel secure
and reflected emotions pure.
The beauty of it glowed
before it the world bowed,
nothing else seemed to please
when my soul i released.
The softness i feltt
made my heart melt,
i focused on you
as some powerful wind blew.
It was first experience so far
when blood vessels were at war,
as to rush to my heart
not let us move apart.
Every inch of me enjoyed
the work at which we were employed,
to get lost in a fantasy
and filled with courtesy.
Unforgettable reality
and the clarity,
of divine act without noise
and hear just one voice.
It was a life time adventure
and i can bear torture,
for having it again
and this time wet in the rain.
Like the movies show
the excellent glow,
in the faces when
they did what they can.
And it is so great indeed
to get what you need,
and get acceptance too
of emotions so true!
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24th Jun 2011 (#)
Wonderful artistic expression!
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24th Jun 2011 (#)
you expressed it so well
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25th Jun 2011 (#)
Beautiful poem, Minakshi. Beautiful flow and tempo. Thank you.
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25th Jun 2011 (#)
Thanks for liking it and praising.... :)
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25th Jun 2011 (#)
Great expressions, keep going my friend :)
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25th Jun 2011 (#)
Thanks Prasul.....:)
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25th Jun 2011 (#)
Just lovely my friend. Thank you for sharing.:)
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25th Jun 2011 (#)
Thankss Denise..
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25th Jun 2011 (#)
That was really lovely, Minakshi, thank you for sharing this with us...
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26th Jun 2011 (#)
Thanks Songbird
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