My First Love
By M. Kari Barr, 26th Jan 2012 | Follow this author
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Here I offer a humorous look at my first and everlasting love...my one and only never to be forsaken
Her Fanatasy
Yo check it…
Dis classy lady she been cruizin’ da lanes
Just chillin on da road tryin ta ease her pains
Yeah mmm… mmm… mmm
Yeah
Tryin ta ease her pains
When befoe da eyes such a sight came to be
Da most beauteous car in history
Yeah dats it
In history
It sent her mind outta control creatin’ thoughts
Her fan-ta-sy
Mm… hmmm her fantasy
Check it
Dis is what she saw-
Midnight blue wit purple bling
sparkles so fine it make her sing
ah ah ah… nah… uh uh uh
She want it bad
Yeah
She want it bad
Her fan-ta-sy to be complete
Need a man to make her scream
Yeah mmm… mmm… mmm
Make her scream
He tall, and dark and oh so wild
Recitin’ da poems like in her dream
An in her hand going down da road
She hold her love
Dat sweet ice cream
Yeah mmm… mmm… mmm
Dat sweet ice cream
Intrinsic Cravings
Anticipation… lip-licking desire consumes and fills my body with longing
Soft are my moans and deep my needs
Cravings intrinsic and base
Lost are the days of sweetest joy
Chaos ensues anon
Enraptured pleasure of my tongue employed
Sensations, deep in my throat
Nevermore to be found my darkness prevails
Long gone is my creamy delight
Banana so rare I’m filled with despair
Frozen confection of life
I hunger…I need…Oh, please grant reprieve!
Bring back my ice cream, oh fate!
My Hook Up Story
He had a motorcycle, at his invitation I got off the bus at his stop.
He took me for a ride…to my original destination, my rendezvous with my first love. Chocolate and banana creamy confection of my dreams. He watched as I savored each stroke of my tongue against the cool sweetness. Ah, ice cream!
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26th Jan 2012 (#)
We need to dream and make our dreams come true! To be honest, Stephen Hawking came to my mind; women are his biggest mystery (not misery!) Thaaks Kari, for this humorous poem - siva
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26th Jan 2012 (#)
One day I will get that Mustang...it's so close!
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26th Jan 2012 (#)
WOW! Kari your intimate share was such a delight to read, You took me way down a very pleasant memory lane so very long ago. You write my kind of poetry my friend:-))
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26th Jan 2012 (#)
Thank you glad you enjoyed it :)
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26th Jan 2012 (#)
Lovely poem down memory lane, Kari. Pleased to meet you.
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26th Jan 2012 (#)
Thanks I hope to see more of your comments :)
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26th Jan 2012 (#)
lovely poem enjoyed my read
thank you for sharing.
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26th Jan 2012 (#)
Thanks, I am pleased :)
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27th Jan 2012 (#)
You did so delightfully sensous by these words..each one dripping succulent..lmao
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29th Jan 2012 (#)
:) you are too cute :)
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11th Feb 2012 (#)
!!!
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