My Fourth Finger
By LOVERME, 8th Jan 2011 | Follow this author
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The fingers I see, long, pointed and soft, as a lotus flowers,distant memory fades and i recall those days.
Poetry
My Fourth Finger
The fingers I see,
Long, pointed and soft,
As a lotus flowers,
Distant memory fades
It graces the face
The fingers once did trace,
As it leaves a churning
Whirl in me
I look beyond my window
Many passers by I see
Who perhaps have yet to do?
Many a chores that await me
The fourth finger
A remembrance of the love
Then so pure
Now in eyes a tear
A quivering sore
The ears continuously ring
As I wash the dishes
Through autumn to spring
The memories of anniversaries
My finger continues to string.
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9th Jan 2011 (#)
Your fourth finger!
The memory and desire still linger deep inside to see your status change but all you get out of life are pennies which should be change and not notes from a man to draw you into a ring for a real tussle and put a ring on your finger as a sign of commitment to love and love you back!!!!!!
Fourth finger, Lovelyhoney, I love this!
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9th Jan 2011 (#)
My Salaams
Arabian Nights
We make up
To break up
And
Then remake
For a longer take,
When we then totally shake
What was our mistake?
I love your intentions
For you are too God’s,
Ah! Allah’s creations
thanks for the read
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9th Jan 2011 (#)
Lovely poem as always from you.
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9th Jan 2011 (#)
Salaams
Arabian Nights
We make up
To break up
And
Then remake
For a longer take,
When we then totally shake
What was our mistake?
I love your intentions
For you are too God’s,
Ah! Allah’s creations
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9th Jan 2011 (#)
hi lovelyhoney
remember me?
remember that poem of mine?
entitled monochrome in time?
feelings have turned
as gray as their hair
i wonder if
my father's 4th finger
already lay bare.
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10th Jan 2011 (#)
i shall recall
ere the snow
does fall
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11th Jan 2011 (#)
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii all howz the going getting on like my poetry do uuuuuuuuuuuu
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15th Jan 2011 (#)
thanks all non commentaors as long as you read and add on to the CANCER FUND I'M HAPPY
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29th Jan 2011 (#)
thanks all and again happy weekend
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