My Friendship with You!!
By laluls212, 26th Jun 2010 | Follow this author
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This is a short poem on friendship and its effects on one's life!!
MY FRIENDSHIP WITH YOU
MY FRIENDSHIP WITH YOU
My friendship with you are the golden
moments of my life..
My eyes are like sky, always, seeing you
from far distance…
My ears are like sweet air always
blowing around you..
My heart is like a butterfly flying around you
where ever you go..
My love is like the blood flowing in you
making you remember me..
My words for you are from my heart
especially for you..
And
My friendship for you is a red rose whose
petals are for you,
fully filled with love only, only for you..
Comments
26th Jun 2010 (#)
Your poetry is very lovely and heartfelt. I love the descriptive narrative you portray love as being. Very nice and thank-you.
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27th Jun 2010 (#)
very nice poem, thanks for sharing. i love poetrz
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15th Jan 2011 (#)
Ur poems are very simple and that is the thing that makes them beutiful!
I hope ur love grows even more for ur 'friends' :P !
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20th Jan 2011 (#)
ha ha.. ;-)
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28th Feb 2011 (#)
Beautifully written, and so descriptive, laluls...I enjoyed this and was touched by it too..
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1st Mar 2011 (#)
Thank u dear.. :-)
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21st Apr 2011 (#)
Short beautiful nice lovely poem.
"My love is like the blood flowing in you" That's a wonderful imagery.
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21st Apr 2011 (#)
Thank you for the comment Rathna!!! You guys make me proud.. :-)
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10th May 2011 (#)
I stumbled upon this poem again, and enjoyed again.
Lovely again!
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10th May 2011 (#)
ha ha.. Thank you Rathna.. :-)
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