My One Wish
By suny, 25th Jul 2010 | Follow this author
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This is the frustration of a person who doesn't know how to write a poem and still trying to do it.
Trying To Write A poem I Fly
I have one just one wish left,
Oh just how to show my true feelings,
I am lying awake, my eyes wide open,
can't even have a suggesting dream,
I think I am built for love,
my hands to write love,
my ears to listen love,
my heart to feel love,
hatred turns me off,
was it a dream last night?
I was flying around on my couch,
though you may enjoy this,
but I was shocked, and confused
how could I fly on a couch?
Yes I thought yes,I could,
trying to write a poem,
I would do any thing ,
but any thing.
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25th Jul 2010 (#)
Crazy thought but well written.
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25th Jul 2010 (#)
Thank you smoothoperator, I consider myself a half poet now,thanks again.
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25th Jul 2010 (#)
Suny,
Writing poetry is like art. When you enter an art musem what you see is not paint by the numbers, but a person's soul. I will look forward to reading your work and hopefully soon see your pictures in a book. You just keep on writing.
Michael
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25th Jul 2010 (#)
Thanks for your comments Michael.
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3rd Aug 2010 (#)
This is beautifully written, suny! Thanks for sharing.
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7th Aug 2010 (#)
Rosabella-I love every thing thats beautiful and there is nothing more beautiful than roses.
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7th Aug 2010 (#)
love is the only word i know but sorry to say,
many mix love with lust
of course lust comes first
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7th Aug 2010 (#)
I love to love,hatred turns me off.
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7th Aug 2010 (#)
great frnd
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7th Aug 2010 (#)
Friends are great, always.
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8th Aug 2010 (#)
iread it again nice wish
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8th Aug 2010 (#)
Thanks again
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9th Aug 2010 (#)
u thank me i thank u
ur sunny who?
the indian actor or abrahams foe
who.... who.... who?
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9th Aug 2010 (#)
I am suny the funny
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9th Aug 2010 (#)
gr888888888888 one tooooooooo many sunny my sunny lik a sonny so many
www.triond.com
lovelyhoney
30000poems there no joking
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9th Aug 2010 (#)
discontinued -they are funny.
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