Pleasures that Men Take and the Revenge

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 17th Aug 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/3w7x2fv9/
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Children are oft at the mercy of brutal men and women too. this is about the loss of virginity in such a manner and the revenge that is taken.

The Shapes of Changers

A child doth cry and moan at night
In his imagination sees
Pictures of many realms of light
But knows not what they mean

Like twinkling stars they fall round him
Strange shapes and motley crews
For in the land of Genies grow
Distortions vast no where to go
Change shapers all are they

And So Will It Be

Clouds stretch across the blue blue sky
Their fluffy folds do hide from view

Twirling shapes and grotesque forms
Waiting there the unwary to take

Darkness falls on wavering trees
Too tired to reach up to the sky
Instead the branches groan and creek
Their trunks now ridden with disease


Results of implements of war
Destroying Nature
Gas chemical warfare and much more

Soft White Flesh

Into this diversity a maiden fair does ride
Her long black locks hang down her back
Her crimson lips are pursed

Thin white fingers hold tight to
The flying mare that is her mount


Around her neck green hands do hang
And bounce they up and down

Loving the feel of soft white flesh
Below the cushioned breasts of She

Loss of Virginity

Once she was a little girl
Her eyes so large and bright

Looked out upon the world they did with joy
An expectation to excite

This was before a band of men
Into her home did come
And took away virginity
In ways so brutal
Ways so fun


Now through her there does run
An anger so intense it shakes her to her core
That moment birthed another Her
Hellbent then to destroy

as it should be

The Doings of the Fair Lady

The rain it falls in sheets of grey
Undistinguishable to be seen
The forms of menhidden from sight
Their fear is palpable to feel

The Lady she draws near and in one blinding
Rake of hand

Turns them into great pyres of flames
Burn then they do

Their piteous voices crying out
But She listens not to them

Orgasm so Sublime

For her an organism so sublime
Its pleasure moves through every cell

Delight at seeing charred to the bone
Black wisps of once was human flesh
Her revenge now is complete


She goes her way
To find more fools to take away

Lured by her so obvious charms
Between her legs and on her lips


No knowing they how they will end
But I do

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Julie for the pics
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Burning, Carolan Nathan, Charred Remains, Cnwriter, Crimson Lips, Pleasures, Pyres, Revenge, Virginity

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
18th Aug 2012 (#)

thank you Mark for all your help...it is appreciated...

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author avatar Buzz
18th Aug 2012 (#)

Superbly written, as always, dear.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
18th Aug 2012 (#)

thank you so much love,,,it is a bit dark....but a great piece to write...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
18th Aug 2012 (#)

Leaving nothing to imagination - the comeuppance, well deserved! Few get away without paying the price as our justice system is porous! The children are gifts from the Creator and don't they come ever so innocent? Then their hurts are also too deep when wronged, when their trust is misplaced. Thanks Carolina for a powerful piece adorned with pictures, video - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
18th Aug 2012 (#)

Siva I know I seem to wander here there and everywhere but is that not what spirit does...thank you so much for your wonderful comments...

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author avatar Mark Gordon Brown
18th Aug 2012 (#)

Not all men are so vile but those that are should be punished.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
18th Aug 2012 (#)

I know they are not...I love you and Steve and Siva and so many of my men friends here on wiki...

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
18th Aug 2012 (#)

Wow! Incredibly powerful! Brilliant, as always. You have the stroke of genius conferred upon you, cnwriter.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
18th Aug 2012 (#)

Oh Steve I sometimes at me writing all this stuff but would not change it for a million dollars!!!

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author avatar A K Rao
18th Aug 2012 (#)

Once again I am in loss of words to express my feelings and emotions! Fantastic piece of work dear Cnwriter! You have got a natural gift of playing with words o pour out your feelings! Thanks a lot!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
18th Aug 2012 (#)

thank you so much A K...it is a gift from God and what comes through me that I write most of the time.

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author avatar jkalwaye
18th Aug 2012 (#)

you always look life from an entirely different corner and that provides a unique beauty and meaning to your poems .Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem .bye .jk

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
18th Aug 2012 (#)

I was always an eccentric dear jk...never thought I would be writing like I do now...

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author avatar GV Rama Rao
18th Aug 2012 (#)

Very nice thinking out of the box. You have used beautiful pics to supplement your wonderful lines.
However, may I say the heading reads orgasms so sublime, but the line below refers to organism. Is this intentional or a typo?

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
18th Aug 2012 (#)

you are right it is a typo but actually I like it. this is what I just gleaned from google search: regarding the word Organism...
a form of life considered as an entity;
makes sense huh!!!!

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author avatar stevetheblogger
18th Aug 2012 (#)

Wow that got my attention great piece written with such a wonderful twist. As usual really enjoyed the read.
Best Wishes
Steve

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
18th Aug 2012 (#)

thank you Steve...such fun writing pieces like this!!!

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author avatar Uma Shankari
19th Aug 2012 (#)

Loved your creative, expressive and evocative lines.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
19th Aug 2012 (#)

thank you Uma....

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author avatar Madan G Singh
19th Sep 2012 (#)

Very thought provoking poem. read it fully yesterday. Simply lovely

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
19th Sep 2012 (#)

again thank you Madan for reading and commenting...

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