SUN on My Face
By Blunt Head, 4th Jan 2011 | Follow this author
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I want to feel the sun
On my face
It makes my heart beat
At a steady pace
It makes me realize
Life is not a race
For my inner turmoil
Its warmth is my cure
And of that I am sure
Free Verse Poem
SUN ON MY FACE
I want to feel the sun
On my face
It makes my heart beat
At a steady pace
It makes me realize
Life is not a race
For my inner turmoil
Its warmth is my cure
And of that I am sure
Its touch on my skin so pure
Like the tears of a new-born baby
That has grown in the womb
Of a righteous lady
Its soul worth much more
Than the entire earth’s gold
Its spirit emits a heavenly glow
Prophesied to follow its path, which the Lord chose
Brought to existence by God’s breath
To live life fruitfully and pass God’s tests
And by God’s will
It will take its last breath
And in heaven will be adorned
With a gold plate on his chest
To protect him from primal hate
On his long quest
That follows through hell’s gate
To help mere mortals
To escape from their flesh
I want to feel the sun
On my face
It makes my heart beat
At a steady pace
It makes me realize
Life is not a race
For my inner turmoil
Its warmth is my cure
And of that I am sure
It rejuvenates me from my hurtful past
Like a phoenix sprouting its wings from the ash
The wind beneath its wings
Carries it away from its burning past
It clarifies my sight
To see people who wear masks
To hid their evil intentions
Of doing many sinister tasks
It clarifies my sight
To see the pain in other’s eyes
And makes me realize
Experiencing pain
While offering your most precious sacrifice
Makes you wise
And increases your life
They tell a story of what your heart holds
For some its boundless love
For others
It’s an empty dark hole
Some might catch a cold
From the ice in their heartless souls
Only the heat of the sun
Can make their hearts shine
With love
And their spirits will soar in the sky like a dove
And their blood will flow like a wound
From a deep cut
Enough to fill a chalice cup
I want to feel the sun
On my face
It makes my heart beat
At a steady pace
It makes me realize
Life is not a race
For my inner turmoil
Its warmth is my cure
And of that I am sure
I want to feel the wind
Blow against my skin
It soothes the fury beast within
I’m trying to live my life clean
Free from sin
I wanna to be liberated
From the cycle of birth, death and rebirth
I wanna achieve spiritual rest
Free my soul from the earth
It’s starting to reek of the pungent smell of death
Sometimes I feel like the forces of good and evil
Are playing with our lives
In a game of chess
I’m longing for the day, when my atman
Merges with Brahman
I’m following the path
Towards the realization
Of ultimate reality
To be one with Ram Ram
And attain spiritual purity
To see my visions and life in clarity
Only then will I see in heavenly light
That the world is nothing but an illusion
Filled to the brim
With mind and spiritual pollution
So many problems
But the self-appointed rulers of earth
Have no solution
Their utterings and laws
Only add to the confusion
They have pimped Mother Earth
Into prostitution
The sages are going to start the new movement
And the ancient serpent will be slain
And your soul will be unchained
From your fleshly shell
That’s tainted in sin
By the long fingers of hell
I want to feel the sun
On my face
It makes my heart beat
At a steady pace
It makes me realize
Life is not a race
For my inner turmoil
Its warmth is my cure
And of that I am sure

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4th Jan 2011 (#)
Very nice.
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7th Jan 2011 (#)
Nice read.
Thank you for sharing.:)
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12th Jan 2011 (#)
...Hi there, Many images, very interesting. Take care.
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21st Jan 2011 (#)
now here iam like what you've just said!!
this ones inspires me, thank you very much!!!,
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22nd Jan 2011 (#)
Thank you very much..You're welcome!
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3rd Apr 2011 (#)
Nice poem, very thoughtful and deep.
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5th Jun 2011 (#)
Thank you :)
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6th Jun 2011 (#)
Very beautiful and inspiring. Great work!
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19th Jul 2011 (#)
Mother Earth is not a prostitute but the wife of the Creator who provides food and abudance to life so that people like ourselves can live.
Mother Earth can never be a prostitute only for the fact she always reinvents herself to adapt to adversity and when she is angry she floods, creates Earthquakes, erupts volcanos, have hailstorm, snow and what not that destroys all other evil forces that are thwarting the laws of nature.
There can me only ONE Planet Earth and no one can ever replace the life in her.
The Sun is her life-breather who gives her the energy to become stronger and provide life to many other living Creatures around. It is the circle of life but just one large Asteroid with the Rivers, seas and land that hold life...
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19th Jul 2011 (#)
To open your eyes to see life around one needs to observe behaviour. It is always a pattern. But attitudes do change in time, the foundation remains the same.
The Dove signifies peace and tranqulity.
Life is a race only for the fact that all of us are judged for our deeds and achievements by the master Creator who is God himself... The retribution of your deeds determines your reformatory requirements to purify and enhance the soul that is within you...
Every child is righteous but I would always maintain that only the mother knows the source of the child and DNA tests just proves the probability theory amongst millions.
So no mother is pure because she has done something that has reaped the fruit of the act. But what she has done is more known to her...
The combat here would be,"I know the father of my child and can prove it. Can you???"
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26th Sep 2011 (#)
Thoughtful indeed...nice..!
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30th Dec 2011 (#)
Good Job.
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