Shine Baby
By Santosh Acharya, 11th Oct 2011 | Follow this author
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A lovely heart has given limitless open sky for her to shine and glow. No clouds and barriers to block her. All he wants her is to shine without any confusion via this short poem.
Shine baby
My words in my poetry are not to exhibit my honesty to this confusing world
My attitude guides me, my actions mobilize me and my outcomes prove me
For love, friendship and meaningful relationships, I'm the man to fly and cripple
Creating the morning of smile, each day with vision, this world I want to see
When I've no clouds to block you, baby ! shine and brighten this world
You are everywhere, so omnipotent and precious, more than diamond and gold.
(Everyone expects to have brightness in their life. Life where there is no glow of love is comparable to dark hell).
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11th Oct 2011 (#)
Oh this is really lovely, Santosh! This made me smile, and I felt the warmth of your sun shine...
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11th Oct 2011 (#)
Intriguing poem. It made me smile like it did to Songbird.
Loved the language of the last line in particular
"You are everywhere, so omnipotent and precious, more than diamond and gold."
Perfect.
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12th Oct 2011 (#)
Wow! This was just gorgeous! I loved the passion wrapped in soft clouds, yet was expanded as clouds across the sky...just divine and one could feel the hold of this poem on the heart! take care
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12th Oct 2011 (#)
Each time the wind blows,
The sunshine and light glows.
It calls the name.
To feel love each morning,
In music dawning.
For life's thats tame.
You know what I feel,
I can't stop until.
You call out my name.
Feeling the light shine,
Saying you are mine.
I am glad you came.
Feeling the passion,
Utmost compassion.
Seep through the pain.
In harmony loving,
The joy of living.
The light is in you.
See the light shining in heart,
Feeling the passion in art.
And if I do stop,
You know I'll drop.
For the light shining in heart.
For the light has come,
To beat in life's drum.
As long as you wait.
Feeling the calling,
No time for stalling.
Just you the same.
See the light shining in heart,
Feeling the passion in art.
And if I do stop,
You know I'll drop.
For the light shining in heart.
For the world of better tomorrow,
Shining light devoid of sorrow.
This is my life,
And I do because I want to.
See the light shining in heart,
Feeling the passion in art.
And if I do stop,
You know I'll drop.
For the light shining in heart.
By Anisha Achankunju (C) 12th October 2011
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13th Oct 2011 (#)
I love your work.
Thanks,
Ivyevelyn.
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13th Oct 2011 (#)
Lovely words and thoughts, Santosh. Keep spreading the light of your love.
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14th Oct 2011 (#)
Hi my dear Santosh Acharya,
You're a true Kaveeshvar of excellence.
Hats off to you for the wonderful poems.
I'm enjoying your poetry.
Do you mind if I suggest you to contemplate on writing some prose about your favorite poems and poetry?
Why I'm suggesting this idea is to have a different approach to your creative skills and also I say this in view of your question about the nutpoints and earnings you asked on one of my pages.
I wrote a separate for you to answer you question which you may please check out.
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14th Oct 2011 (#)
I mean "I wrote a separate page for you to answer your question".
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3rd Nov 2011 (#)
What a nice article. I am now one month in wikinut and I decided to write a poem dedicating it to all my followers since I consider your guys family in this wonderful community of writers. Since you happen to be one of them, I suggest you read it and leave a comment. Thanks a lot
http://www.wikinut.com/hurraaay%21-it-s-a-month-in-wikinut%3a-great-community%2c-happy-people-and-one-family/3vdwnvc./oqtom66d/
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29th Nov 2011 (#)
The originality of a poet,
is revealed in his
versatillty and uniqueness...
let not others try to over shadow you
by posting similar lines ,
they feel others would read more
this world of internet is more dicey, than it was before.
take care good young friend
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17th Jan 2012 (#)
THnx alot santosh, I know ur away for dayys just like me
i just signed in and ur name clicked into my mind, I was sort of down and ur smile was what I thought of and wow MASHALLAH ur smile made me calm down
THNX ALOT for that dear
:D awaiting fr ur reply
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10th Feb 2012 (#)
Love is limitless but we are its worst enemy - uplifting poem, Santosh - siva
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