Some fun
By Socrates Pondiferous, 4th Oct 2011 | Follow this author
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As they say it take all types of people to make a world
Some Fun
n my writing, there will be comedy some happened actually
As people perhaps based on how they lived so secluded
Perhaps thought that all was good in what they did
Well as always on has to be sort of opinionated
This guy on a night when the lightning was flashing so brightly
Ordered his his family to dress up appropriately
So they all went outside, there was much drama
He told them the master was taking there picture with his flash-light camera
Then too the with the lightning the thunder was rolling
The little children were scared at the noise this was creating
He shouted behave yourself, this is small matter
It just the master moving around his furniture.
Another friend once told his girlfriend put on her best
He is going to put her opinion of him to the test
So the coming Friday night no later than eight
He was going to take her on very romantic date.
The lady spent the rest of the week in a daze
Finally her boyfriend has mended his cheap way
Now this point in the relationship has now come
Where they can spend time together and have some fun
That night came and my she looked so chic
A picture of beauty those who saw readily admit
But there was a look of disgust on her face
When the date was to watch a TV program called Let's go to the races
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4th Oct 2011 (#)
i like your page
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15th Dec 2011 (#)
I am liking your style. I went back to your bio, I like what you had written. This old 48 (just turned tyvm) Alabama woman have taken a chance with this site since, May 2010. I have always been a reader and even taken pride in letters I would write to love ones but, me write a thing that even one person might care about, was not computing in this woman's head. To my dismay, I went and looked at the best (still do) and I read their pages and treated it as homework. I started to study their formatting, their writing and how they do it in a proper way. I study how they tag pages. I was given a camera from a good friend and started to take photos. I listen to those old timers that know their stuff, you see, they are on this site and they have so generously given to many of us. I am actually averaging about a A-. I now consider myself a senior in my own version of, cheap womans college. I hope you don't mind that I have taken up so much space. It was just what you wrote down, in your bio, about taking a chance. I think you have talent as a writer. You just need to get the formatting down a bit better. I hope I did not cross the line with my advice. In my defense, my 26 year old daughter is 2000 miles away from me, I miss her deeply and I just feel like mothering some one.LOL
Love the art. Thank you for sharing.:)
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