Sometimes things may seem impossible...
By Abioye Munashe, 29th May 2011 | Follow this author
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Patience, positive thoughts, and hard work is enough to get you out of distress. people who work hard despite challenges are the ones always successful.
Repetition
I have no Name
I am tormented…
trapped in an abyss of repetition,
Repetition of torment and pain with the same thing over and over again.
My eyes drained dry because there is no more tear;
So although I feel the pain I cry tearless cries,
Because my heart is weak, my body drained
and like a waste-land without water I stand bare.
All I feel is PAIN over and over again.
I feel pain repeatedly...
oh I said that already...
Repetitions see!
it is all that surrounds me so i cannot think…
just the same thing again and again,
It is all I know...
Pain, torment and misery...
Leaving me whitewashed with a limited vocabulary.
M favorite word...pain
My best vocab anguish, distress grief, heartache
and all the synonyms describing my reality...
I know nothing else.
I opened my mouth….
The same thing…pain.
I rose up in the morning but instead of sunshine
I saw shadows of misery rising up in the east,
And the shadow extending to the west,
so I was unable distinguish night from day.
The darkness of the shadows hugged me
And instead of warm I felt cold and lonely.
Pain over and over again...
oh I said that already...
Repetitions see!
it is all that surrounds me,
engulfing and shaping my reality.
Seems like I am left to smile and swim
if I want to go on living.
Living in my reality
Until it is placed behind me.

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30th May 2011 (#)
Ouch, powerful share!
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30th May 2011 (#)
Thanks for sharing Abioye ;)
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30th May 2011 (#)
thank you too
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30th May 2011 (#)
Powerful share my friend..you bring great atmosphere to all your work.
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31st May 2011 (#)
thank you song bird...I am glad you like my writing
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31st May 2011 (#)
Very emotional poem, realistic and well written.
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1st Jun 2011 (#)
Very well crafted, the repeating thought and feeling, very powerful poetic method, thanks I enjoyed this very much!
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2nd Jun 2011 (#)
Hello ~ sad poem though very meaningful, thank you for your friendship... :)
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4th Jun 2011 (#)
I like your positive ending here... smile and swim......Until it is placed behind me....reminds me of the saying 'this too shall pass'
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4th Jun 2011 (#)
:-) yes MARIA that is exactly what we should do when challenges come along in life
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