Take care my friend... a poem

richardpeeej By richardpeeej, 16th Apr 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/795307ip/
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A poem that shows how you need to be so careful before rushing into marriage

Take Care my Friend

Listening to the sounds of Spring.
New hearts betrothed, a wedding ring.
It is now that thoughts of love ring true,
So many find a love that's new.

Listening to the summer sound,
When shimmering sun is all around.
Love now reaches a new found high
It reaches miles up in the sky.

Now the Autumn sounds it drums,
Would you rather just be chums?
To reap good times within your life,
And free yourself from wedded strife,

Winter wind sounds chaff your skin,
You need the comfort of your kin,
Take heed my friend for this has shown,
You'd much prefer to be alone!

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Alone, Biss, Free, Wedding

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I enjoy playing the guitar, gardening, writing poems, doing a bit of cooking and catching up with my good friends on the net

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author avatar Delicia Powers
16th Apr 2011 (#)

I love the seasons and your poem "played-off" them beautifully a well crafted poem and a joy to read, thank you...

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author avatar Songbird B
16th Apr 2011 (#)

Sound advice my friend, sometimes wisdom calls, and it's voice gets lost in the joy of Spring.... Bittersweet poem, Richard, cleverly written.
This is a great share...

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author avatar foxpete88
17th Apr 2011 (#)

nice poems. thanks for sharing.-

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author avatar richardpeeej
17th Apr 2011 (#)

Thanks very much Delicia for your visit and your kind comment.

Thank you Songbird I always appreciate your supportive words. I love reading your poems too.

Thank you Foxpete it is good to hear from you. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem.

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author avatar Denise O
17th Apr 2011 (#)

Richard it is a bitter sweet poem but, it is one that I wish more would take to heart. Nice work of art. Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar richardpeeej
17th Apr 2011 (#)

Thank you Denise for your wonderful support it is always so good to hear from you...

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author avatar krrymarie
18th Apr 2011 (#)

Richard what a lovely poem. I enjoyed reading this very much.

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author avatar richardpeeej
18th Apr 2011 (#)

Thanks Kerry I appreciate your comments so much. Hope you are well my friend. .

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author avatar KWriter
28th Apr 2011 (#)

Very well written...using the seasons to show the disintegration of a relationship was clever and worked perfectly.

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author avatar richardpeeej
28th Apr 2011 (#)

Well thank you KWriter that is good of you to leave such a welcomed comment.

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author avatar Songbird B
28th Apr 2011 (#)

I came back to look in on you my friend, and reread your poem that has stayed in my thoughts...It really is a great poem, Richard, with great insight.....

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author avatar richardpeeej
28th Apr 2011 (#)

Thank you Bev my friend I am so pleased that you came back to have another look at my poem..thank you...

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