When e'er I look...
By richardpeeej, 24th Nov 2011 | Follow this author
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Sometimes life can seem very hard and the help and advice of a close friend can get you through the deepest of worries
When e'er I look..
A poem showing how you can lead a friend, who may be having turmoil in their life, to a better life elsewhere.....
When e'er I look into your eyes,
I see a life that has such sorrow.
Come my friend, and take my hand,
I'll lead you to a bright tomorrow.
When e'er I touch your skin my friend,
it is so cold, it feels like ice.
Let me warm you with my heart,
You'll feel much better in a thrice!
When e'er I hear your voice my friend,
It sounds as pure as any bird.
And when it says 'I love you so',
It's the sweetest sound I've ever heard.
Richardpeeej Nov 2011
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25th Nov 2011 (#)
How lovely this is Rich, and what a real pleasure it is to see you publishing on a regular basis! We all need a good friend in our life, someone we can turn to in support and comfort, and this poem captures that beautifully.. This really touched me so much dear friend..A genuine pleasure to read..\0/Xx
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25th Nov 2011 (#)
My computer is having some glitches, my friend. Loved this before the monitor turns black.
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25th Nov 2011 (#)
Thank you Bev for your support as always my good friend. So glad that you enjoyed reading my poem. You can never have too many friends can you..:-) x
Thank you also Buzz for your support too my friend. I hope that you will be able to read this before your monitor packs up again !
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25th Nov 2011 (#)
What a good friend you are. I feel you have touched on the basics of being a good one and that is just by being there for them. As always, thank you for sharing.:)
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25th Nov 2011 (#)
Very touching poem about true friendship, which just amy be the highest form of love. Well done richardpeeej.
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25th Nov 2011 (#)
Well thank you so much Denise what a lovely thing to say my friend. Your words are so appreciated.
Thank you for your kind comments Steve, friends are so special aren't they,,
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5th Dec 2011 (#)
Lovely love poem...
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8th Dec 2011 (#)
Glad you liked it Delicia your support is very valuable to me..
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16th Jan 2012 (#)
Touching poem.
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16th Jan 2012 (#)
Thank you so much Kerry :-)
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