A Little Bit of This...A Little Bit of That...A Satire supreme....

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 12th Jun 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2nd2xbn4/
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This was a fun piece to write as I really did not know where it was going...or where it came from...but that happens often with my writings...so apologies to anyone who takes it personally...you have indeed a big hurdle to overcome...enjoy

The Pack

A pack of dogs set out one day
A visit to the king
The one who at the corner sat
Upon his head a mangy ring

Grouped around were acolytes
The ones who bowed their heads
In which nothing was contained
Except the rattle of genetic foods

Some with blonde hair
Or maybe wigs
Low on their foreheads draped
Around their ears too

Silly Muts

They pushed and shoved
As were bound to
No upbringing at all
Enjoyed
Pariahs everyone

Thrown out on their buts
By those who better knew
Had had enough of their poor ways
Those silly muts

Black and white
Some black and blue
As along the street
In packs tight
They made their way

Never-able-to's

Corner lights turned red then green
But none crossed
Feared they were come up against
The ring of never-able-to's

Instead they took the long way round
Up hill down dale
Through forest and muddy stream
A fearsome journey so it seemed

A Sickly MorAss

A never-ending journey actually
Made by those who choose to go
Thinking it a way back home
When it is but a road to hell

Fanciful indeed may seem
A nightmare could be
Taken by many never were told
The perils of genetic foods

Poisons contained therein for sure
Slow down your energy
Take away your good sense
Leaving but a shell
Covering a sickly mass
A sticky morass of flesh and bones

Recognize some will

If you see yourself herein
Recognize the way you are
Then this satire not in vain
Fun indeed to write
More fun I hope to read

Some will like it
Some will not
Especially those who think a finger
Pointed at them is

I have lost a number of friends
Here on wikinut
Because they thought it was themselves
I wrote of
Or their friend

Not so
Why waste my precious time on those of you

and so it is....

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
13th Jun 2014 (#)

A fun, fun read...
...who bowed their heads
In which nothing was contained
Except the rattle of genetic foods"
How masterfully clever! Great images too.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
13th Jun 2014 (#)

many thanks Steve...fun indeed...oh oh oh!!!!

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author avatar snerfu
13th Jun 2014 (#)

out and about...great pickings too nice article cnwriter

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
13th Jun 2014 (#)

thank you too my friend...

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
13th Jun 2014 (#)

The other one touched me more, but I liked the card playing dogs. I have one of that artist's prints: "Jack the Ripper." I had bought it in October for my boyfriend at the time. Was going to give it to him for Christmas. Then we broke up. Until this last move, I have kept it hung in my bathroom as a reminder not to waste my time on little shits. Ha!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
13th Jun 2014 (#)

you are such a hoot Phyl...love you so much I do...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
14th Jun 2014 (#)

Interesting thoughts, funny images and video, thanks Carolina - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Jun 2014 (#)

a bit different yes but fun...

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
14th Jun 2014 (#)

Nice share.

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
14th Jun 2014 (#)

Nice share.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Jun 2014 (#)

thank you so much Randhir..

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author avatar Kingwell
15th Jun 2014 (#)

Fun to read.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Jun 2014 (#)

and to write my friend....

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