A Misunderstood Love of Mine

juny By juny, 21st Sep 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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But…I don’t know if this time I can claim “love is mine forever”

My Misunderstood Love

Why am I so unlucky in love?
Am I holding love too tight that make it breathless and it dies?
Am I holding it too loose that I lost grip and someone can stole it before my eyes?
Am I too lax or over confident that I own love like a possession.
Am I too domineering that makes you feel less a man you are ?
Am I too caring that you lost your freedom?
Am I too passionate that you feels boring without fun, don’t I never knew humor at all?
Am I too honest that you doubted my words, you feel I am just pretending it all.
Am I too understanding to make you feel uneasy and make you feel worry.
Am I giving too much, giving it all that you can’t bear to take everything in reality.
Am I loving you with too much greatness that you feel I am cheating behind.
Am I giving you everything that made you feel you haven’t given a part of you?
Am I giving you a world of fantasy that gives you doubts if I am thinking with anxiety?
Or I haven’t done enough to make you feel how much you mean to me?
You maybe have doubts that I am just playing with your around.
Why can’t you listen to your heart?
I am sure you will find the answer to my MISUNDERSTOOD LOVE!


“I found love when I am ready to live my life alone and settled myself that I won’t love again. But you came into my life without any warning and I tell myself why not give it a try. I gamble again in this game called LOVE.


But…I don’t know if this time I can claim “love is mine forever”

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Love And Desire, Love Poem, Love Poetry, Love Romance Definition What Is It, Misunderstand, Misunderstood, Realtionship

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author avatar juny
I am your simple neighbor who lives next door,also loves to write short poem.
A music addict and a hopeless romantic who believes that love is like a fairy tale.

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author avatar Retired
21st Sep 2011 (#)

oh love is something that you keep for good...if you had it then its miss would be hugely felt

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author avatar juny
22nd Sep 2011 (#)

Hello Shishir,

Sometimes I just felt that my giving my best wasn't good enough.

thanks for your comment and have a good day :)

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author avatar Retired
21st Sep 2011 (#)

Dear friend, you have wonderfully expressed how true love is being far from you, for that skill, I should definitely compliment you from the bottom of my heart.

Even after having so much enlightenment about love, we feel nervous and positively paralyzed in love and forget to notice how we have got into somebody. The dose of love work so much that we just want to feel good without no pain. We trust in love but people we believe having different attitude and character deceive us in someway. Hence we blame our luck or fate not working on our favour.

I regard love as a faith. Like I believe upon an unseen supernatural faith, Like I believe that summer comes at least once in a year after cold winter, in the same manner, I believe that we get chance to enjoy our life with true love at at least certain stage of life. In the ye of flower, the entire world is flower and in the eye of thorns, the whole world is thorns. Be lovable and sweet like this, I strongly believe that love will chase you soon.

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author avatar juny
22nd Sep 2011 (#)

hello Santosh,

How I wish that person will soon chase me :).

I never regret loving him, I always give my best thou it hurts.

Thank you so much for your kind words and views.
Have a good day :)

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author avatar Retired
22nd Sep 2011 (#)

I'd like to give you a nickname from today and hope you would like it. (if you have not already got the one) If you wouldn't mind, I'd address you by name Maaya/Maya which means love in my native language. Hope each time I call you by this name, you'd feel loved or at least the loving name will be always hovering you.

The time is a very powerful factor that brings changes in our life. At the same time we should be in "get up" position to accept the gift that the time is going to reward us. I'm sure beautiful spring season will bring you the greenery of hope and love in your life.

Close your eyes and feel it.....

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author avatar Delicia Powers
24th Sep 2011 (#)

Very heart felt poem...!

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author avatar juny
25th Sep 2011 (#)

Thank you mam Delicia and have a good day always :)

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author avatar Tranquilpen
26th Sep 2011 (#)

A beautiful poem, When I had dated several, Mrs.'s right many years ago, the relationships just died.I decided to just let go, after all, God knows what we want and need. Just then the real Mrs Right came along, that was 37 years ago, and you know what, she is more of a Mrs. Right than ever before:-))

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author avatar juny
27th Sep 2011 (#)

Thanks for sharing your story sir and have a good day :)

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author avatar Shreeja
26th Sep 2011 (#)

Very nice oballesansano :)

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author avatar juny
27th Sep 2011 (#)

hello Sheeja,

Thanks for your read and have a good day :)

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