A Tale of Revenge Gone Wrong....

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 14th Sep 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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So many people seek revenge for what often are illusionary slights. They search not realizing it is their own life they are harming. Some beautiful music here and a video of eyes ...all sorts to enjoy....

In garments green...

Swathed in garments green
Enchantress comes
Lips red as blood
Eyes piercing

Look she does
For long lost love
A man as beautiful as she
Left he did her all alone

video by aeternus

Through windswept trees
In flowing streams
Oceans deep
Beneath the sea

Alone revenge...

Lifetimes go by
Searches She
A never-ending journey

Anger shakes Her body wild
Nails long and pointed
Sharp
Lips curl in disdain

All kindness has disappeared
Revenge alone remains
Hair matted has become
Once lissom limbs now bent with age
Her beauty gone

A story this of many folk
Who hang on to the bitter end

Looking

Eyes search everywhere
Without compare
Looking looking looking

Eyes by zülfü livaneli "gözlerin"

She knows not anymore
What she is looking for
Memory long disappeared
Only feelings left
Revenge

Illusions be....

Silly woman she doth be
Only herself to harm
Hurt feelings like wisps of air
Can be changed so easily

Yet run a gamut so many do
Trying to find way through
Fields of illusionary pain
Over
Over
Again

and so it is....

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Beauty, Carolannathan, Cnwriter, Despair, Enchantress, Garments, Hatred, Illusions, Lifetimes, Looking, Lost, Loving, Revenge, Searching

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you Mark..weird this but not as much as the next one...

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Sep 2014 (#)

thanks Mark...

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author avatar spirited
15th Sep 2014 (#)

Lovely moving picture into the eye of oneness, carolina

We can hold similar thoughts of revenge as regret against ourselves to, by not forgiving ourselves for some things we did in our past I feel.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Sep 2014 (#)

this is only a story spirited...at least for me...

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
15th Sep 2014 (#)

Interesting one my dear, indeed, cheers!!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Sep 2014 (#)

yes a bit strange indeed...

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author avatar C.D. Moore
15th Sep 2014 (#)

Revenge is indeed a two edged sword. Beautifully done, Carolina!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Sep 2014 (#)

yes! like pointing finger...three point back!!!!

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author avatar Kingwell
15th Sep 2014 (#)

Never seek revenge for what goes around comes around.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Sep 2014 (#)

I know!

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author avatar snerfu
16th Sep 2014 (#)

Nice pictures great article cnwriter

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
16th Sep 2014 (#)

so kind of you my friend...

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
16th Sep 2014 (#)

Hate that you're dealing with the old jealousies again. But I am glad you can bring creative response.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
16th Sep 2014 (#)

well my dearest Phyl...i write what comes up for me to do...blessings..

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
16th Sep 2014 (#)

You have portrayed the ugliness of revenge and its adverse consequences amazingly , Carolina .
Something to be avoided at all costs .
God tells us that , Vengeance is His ...so I for one am happy to leave that with Him.
Bless you
Stella ><

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
16th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you dear Stella...blessings ...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
16th Sep 2014 (#)

Even willful slights I ignore - it is not my karma, so why bother at all - just move on as part and parcel of life. Our thought process and actions are meant to be above all such but fixated and paying homage to the wondrous creative process that we are part of. Needed message to show the right direction with uplifting embellishments, thanks dear Carolina - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
16th Sep 2014 (#)

yes it is so Siva. I have learned to push stuff away from me like holding it at a distance saying ..this is yours...not mine...it works! blessings of light and love to you my friend...

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author avatar Retired
16th Sep 2014 (#)

So true, revenge is a waste of time spent better on forgiving and loving and living our lives as fully as we can. Long-held revenge makes one bitter and hateful...and it shows on the outside as well. Wonderful!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
16th Sep 2014 (#)

I so agree Lyn...if ignored such stuff will just return to the sender...and we walk free in our loving and light......blessings.

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author avatar Lee Hansen
16th Sep 2014 (#)

Read with rapt attention and intrigue. Revenge is never a positive thing no matter how tempting to do.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
16th Sep 2014 (#)

many thanks Lee...

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