A Tongue In Cheek Piece...and So It Is....Some Will Like, Others Not....

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 29th Jul 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Sometimes I think many of us get heartedly sick of cell phones/mobiles and peoples' voices blaring everywhere, of banging, shouting, noise noise noise...what happened to the peaceful life.....it seems to have left long time ago....

Oh Dear Me

If you would want to know
What is going on
Brain dead folk in motor cars
On their mobiles texting madly
Ranting raving
Eyes screwed up
Hands waving in the air
Turning corners at breakneck speed
Pedestrians barely safely there


[i]i]All the time this does go on

How did they get this way
You very well may ask
Too much too soon given to them
But no responsibility
Ability to respond in ways of respect

Such a word never they did hear

Sameness Copied

To them the world a living owes
Why they do not really know
Easy consumption so it seems
Always mine they say
Never yours

TV and movies to them do show
A world of riches glamour too
To be like them is what they want
But never can have is so

Have hair like that one
Boobs like that
Tatooed all over
Makeup copied religiously
On faces that never quite look the same

A Cut Åbove

Products of a generation gone mad
Brainwashed by food companies
Eating food that poisons body and mind
Leaving all goodness far behind

Sneer they do at decent folk
Thinking themselves better
A cut above
When in their fancy cars
Race down the road
Hang out in clubs all night
Nothing wrong with that for sure
Its just their surly attitude

Saying It As It Is

Not like me to write this way
At least not too often
But after a day of nearly being killed
And a barrage of cell phone voices
Enough is enough
Say it as it is I will
As I usually do
So many know by now
Ha ha


And so I leave you all
Half cocked
Not sure whom I really mean
If that cap fits wear it
And if not
Do not
A tongue in cheek piece this be


and so it is

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Blondes, Carolan Nathan, Cars, Cell Phones, Cnwriter, Copy All, Mobiles, Motor Cars Tongue In Cheek, Noise, Rant, Rave, Respect

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
29th Jul 2013 (#)

oh oh oh!!!!

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author avatar jenny1015
29th Jul 2013 (#)

as always, superb expression!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
29th Jul 2013 (#)

well it got to me today as you can see....thank you Jenny dear....

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author avatar Connie McKinney
30th Jul 2013 (#)

Good message, Carolina. Well expressed and written as usual.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Jul 2013 (#)

thanks love....

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author avatar Retired
30th Jul 2013 (#)

Wow! very well expressed.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Jul 2013 (#)

thank you

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author avatar Terry Trainor
30th Jul 2013 (#)

Most days I leave my phone indoors. If somebody nearly runs me down or causes an accident I tell them what I think of them in no uncertain terms, if the men get nasty I walk towards them spitting poison the soon get in their cars and drive away.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Jul 2013 (#)

good on you Terry!!

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author avatar Carol
30th Jul 2013 (#)

Oh this did make me laugh, well done!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Jul 2013 (#)

said as it is Carol..hugs

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
30th Jul 2013 (#)

I admit; I'm attached to the silly thing. It took years to upgrade to the "smart phone," some days it makes me feel dumb. ;) Good article, par usual!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Jul 2013 (#)

thank you Phyl...I dont have one...and can you believe I am still alive and functioning well...

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author avatar vpaulose
30th Jul 2013 (#)

STAR poem. Thank you CN.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Jul 2013 (#)

thank you too vp....

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author avatar Trillionaire
31st Jul 2013 (#)

Awesome.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
31st Jul 2013 (#)

so many thanks my friend...

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author avatar wonder
31st Jul 2013 (#)

The poem is a coincidence, only last night I grumbled at someone at the cell phone uselessly, while I waited and wasted some time.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
31st Jul 2013 (#)

are there such things as coincidence or is everything a product of perfect timing!!!

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author avatar M G Singh
31st Jul 2013 (#)

Nice !

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
31st Jul 2013 (#)

thank you Madan...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
31st Jul 2013 (#)

Your lovely post resonates with most, Carolina. I find most lack basic etiquette as they get carried away when the cell phone lights up. They get lost in their own world unmindful of the surroundings. We are moving in uncharted territory, becoming robotic - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
31st Jul 2013 (#)

well not you nor I siva...blessings

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author avatar Delicia Powers
4th Aug 2013 (#)

Very cleverly done!...LOL

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Aug 2013 (#)

and to you Delicia..hugs lots of 'em...

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