A Vicious Piece Indeed...meant for one who Rants and Raves on our pages

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 14th Nov 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/336trb4u/
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There will always be those who attack because of their own lack. this page is written because every piece I write is attacked by someone who is not even a member of this wonderful site...and it is only because today has been so difficult that my upset manifests through these vicious words...

Attack

Go!
Do not come near me
Your poison
Hard to bear
Spews from every point of you
Into the world

You can be found most every place
Look into mirror you will see
Darkness looking back
For that is what you are
Evil personified

From Hades

Perhaps as a child
You learned so well
How to walk through life
Perhaps on a crucifix were hung
For sins to numerous to count

Betrayed you did
Yourself and those who loved you once
Now hatred you personify
From Hades

Blackness of one hundred nights

Lifetimes galore
In which you placed
Darkness in every cell
You knew how this was done
Fallen angels taught you so well

Now again you walk
The self same path
In mire your body dwells
Darkness all around you
Black as a hundred nights rolled into one

Pity

Pity is what we have for you
Such pain you must go through
Beating your own drum
A hundred times and more to score

But we all of self same mind
Delete you again and again
Knowing of your ego bright
Trying so hard to be someone
When you are nothing at all

Karmic return

Nowhere else you have to go
Except belittling those like me
Who write of Light and Sound
For all to see

In againstness you do work
Woe to you a thousand times
On you it will return
For karma does that all the time
Over and over
Again again
And more


as it will be for you...

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar madugundurukmini
14th Nov 2013 (#)

nice poem

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Nov 2013 (#)

thank you...

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author avatar Retired
14th Nov 2013 (#)

your caricature is well taken and I guess I know where it is pointing.............hmmm yeah

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Nov 2013 (#)

well it is deserved....

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author avatar MarilynDavisatTIERS
14th Nov 2013 (#)

Good morning, Carolina - although you have someone in mind, I think my person may be different, yet the poem speaks to the nature of karma, so the person does not matter - actions go around. Love it:) ~Marilyn

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Nov 2013 (#)

bless you Marilyn...and thanks too...

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author avatar joyalariwo
14th Nov 2013 (#)

I love the idea of karma but does it really really really happen?

With so many crazy things going on, that if I start recounting there wouldn't be much space left.

Yes I can't help but wonder if karma does exist but as usual wonderful work Carolina and congrats on your star cos you're definately one.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Nov 2013 (#)

thank you joyalariwo for your comment and yes Karma does exist but only that which we cause...the effect rolls around... but karma should not be viewed as negative...it is a way of balancing what we have created not only in this lifetime but all of our lifetimes...I see it as an action that I need to work on ..a classroom experience..however if we cry and bemoan what is happening in our lives, we tend to make the happening worse and so it grows and becomes even bigger and harder to handle...my teacher J-R says ..Just love it all...which changes the frequency and lifts you above it....namaste...

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author avatar waterhorse
14th Nov 2013 (#)

I don't mind if someone has a different point of view but when someone accuses you of being a liar like this person did to me, it becomes abuse.Everyone else on this site is very positive which is wonderful. Thank you Carolina!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Nov 2013 (#)

and thank you too my friend...the one we speak of seems to be trying to upset us all...send her much light she needs it...

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author avatar Retired
14th Nov 2013 (#)

Interesting piece!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Nov 2013 (#)

well it is timely at least....

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
14th Nov 2013 (#)

Ah! That's why the silly name isn't clickable for the unfollow!! It all makes sense now! I love your love; I love your vitriol; I love it all!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Nov 2013 (#)

great! for loving is the big key....

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Nov 2013 (#)

I never read her comments..just scroll past them and delete so she really is wasting her time ...and giving some of us a page to write about ha ha ha.....

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author avatar waterhorse
14th Nov 2013 (#)

Why do they allow non members to post comments?

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Nov 2013 (#)

I do not know but I think all sites allow it...we unfortunately have this mad woman on ours...perhaps revenge for being thrown out of wikinut some while back.....

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author avatar Retired
15th Nov 2013 (#)

great poetic work!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Nov 2013 (#)

thank you Ambrine..just about to comment on your page...

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author avatar M G Singh
15th Nov 2013 (#)

Nice poem Carolina, hope people understand it

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Nov 2013 (#)

I think they do...the comments verify this...

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author avatar Md Rezaul Karim
15th Nov 2013 (#)

I believe every single deed will be accountable. In this earth rewards and punishments would be delivered by the law of nature, and after death our Creator would do the final judgement- or mercy!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Nov 2013 (#)

so true what you write Md...thank you...actually we punish ourselves for the Knower inside knows....

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Nov 2013 (#)

thank God He is merciful...it is only we who perpetrate wrongness..

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author avatar S. C. Weeks
16th Nov 2013 (#)

Please forgive me, if I speak out of turn, but these types want to be fed of from the negative energy... You are not a child so I leave you to thought... I do apologize if I insult. You will and always have my respect.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
16th Nov 2013 (#)

what you say is true but they also need to be told not to do what they do and the results of their doing such...I have asked her many times in a very caring way to please not do this on my pages but she continues because she feeds off everything good bad indifferent...it makes no matter what...

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
17th Nov 2013 (#)

Beautiful work and very inspired in every line, You are the tops my dear Caro! No wondeer I admire you and your work as well, you're an inspiration, Ciao!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2013 (#)

well Fern as I always say...it takes one to know one...and your pages are wonderful too...

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author avatar Clarence Schreiber
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

A well thought out poem in which I do admire you and respect you for. I know that we all have different views on things. I know the the person will get their just due for the bad that they do and say unto others. You are a great person and don't let this person get to you. Keep up the awesome job my friend.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

will do Clarence and having people like you around makes it all worthwhile...blessings...

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