A Wait So Beautiful...

Sana Rose By Sana Rose, 17th Sep 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
Posted in Wikinut>Writing>Poetry

This is a poem I wrote yesterday, on the spot, for my guy. :)
Didn't strike a word, didn't edit anything. Written at a stretch in a few minutes at a sudden whim! :)

A Wait So Beautiful...

My love to you amounts
To heights and depths that no man
Can even begin to seek in this world,
And it's simply grown more than
I can confine inside my heart,
So I'm giving it to you, sweetheart...

Take it gently, dont stop to think,
For if you think, it might make
No sense to your reasons, but truly
It's not something you can foresake,
For then it would be like being blind,
And each other, we would never find...

Even if it's hard to give back,
Just keep it, I shall wait until
That much-longed day when
Me you will slowly fulfill,
As if I were a wish, a dream,
Oh, so beautiful the waitings seem...

-September 16th, 2011
(c) Sana Rose

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Beautiful, Love, Love Poem, Wait For Him, Waiting, Waiting For Love

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author avatar Sana Rose
A medical student with a love story with the pen since I was thirteen. Published poet at 22 and has completed a second collection and my first novel. Visit me at: www.sanarose.com

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author avatar Humza
19th Sep 2011 (#)

awww that was lovely sana, ur guy might have called it a day for u and wud have taken u ona treat for sure after having read the dedication

that was beautiful and as it was instant without any rechecking s and editing its worth a whole lot of praise

thnx alot for sharing :)

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author avatar Sana Rose
19th Sep 2011 (#)

Thanks, Humza.. Actually, we don't go out ever and won't until we get married.. But yes, he definitely loves me lots..:)

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author avatar Retired
19th Sep 2011 (#)

Oh My Love, you have returned,
Chains of fame you have discerned.
To be with me just all the while,
Gently love me with a smile.

Holding me close in arms tonight,
Feeling the passion that is so right.
The ethereal respelendence beyond the the walls,
Explodes in cascades into waterfalls.

With shimmering lace you cover me whole,
Enthrall intrigue and make me whole.
Flying place to place with looks of awe,
Of magnificant beauty that is so raw.

With quivering arms I do shake,
In the resplendence of the diamond lake.
To feel raptured in your voice of love,
I hear my calling from the One Above.

Slowly I soar, and gently fly,
Walk on water navigate the sky.
To feel the voice of the magical child,
Blessed and free roaming wild.

In his heavenly music do I bask,
With angelic strains within task.
To feel the anthem that resonates my soul,
With laterns of pleasure making me whole.

Haunting colours in resplendence blest,
Each finger of pleasure I feel caressed.
To feel the petals as you steal a kiss,
With songs of love in eternal bliss.

Flowing gently through the meandering curves,
Gently gushing through all the swires.
To feel the cascade flow into a cave,
In secret endurance, my love I save.

For in that cave is my deepest heart,
The anthemic pleasure when we're apart.
I close my eyes and dream with a smile,
For Angel of Creation, I just love your style.

By Anisha Achankunju (C) 20th September 2011

Thank you for this Sana, you inspired it...

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author avatar Sana Rose
19th Sep 2011 (#)

You are an amazing poet, Anisha.. :) Really loved this poem!
Thank you so much!

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author avatar Retired
3rd Oct 2011 (#)

You deserve it too... You have the gift of the pen!!! Keep at it and you will reach greater heights!!! :-)

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author avatar Buzz
19th Sep 2011 (#)

Very romantic, sana. Lovely share.

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author avatar Sana Rose
19th Sep 2011 (#)

Thank you, Buzz.. :) am glad you like it..

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author avatar Tranquilpen
19th Sep 2011 (#)

Sana Rose, remarkable poem, Thank you so much. Not sure why Aiyanna writes her stuff on other peoples pages though?

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author avatar Retired
3rd Oct 2011 (#)

I write it to give the person who inspired it the credit for the inspiration.
So that is why it is written.

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author avatar Sana Rose
19th Sep 2011 (#)

Thank you dear friend.. :)
about writing in others' page, I don't know that either, but I don't do it. Sadly, I rarely get time to read here though those who like my writing come down to read me always and I appreciate it so much. I believe comments are to talk about the work concerned, to take a break from our own.

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author avatar Humza
20th Sep 2011 (#)

Wow thats sweet :)

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author avatar Songbird B
23rd Sep 2011 (#)

This is really lovely, Sana. You have a great gift with words, and your love really does shine through in this.. This is a really lovely inspired share..

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author avatar Sana Rose
23rd Sep 2011 (#)

Thank you so much Songbird.. :) nice to see you again.

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author avatar Bridgitte Williams
27th Dec 2011 (#)

This is so lovely, BRAVO!! :-) I loved it. You have great natural poetic talent. Never stop. I am now following your work. Write on.

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author avatar Sana Rose
18th Jan 2012 (#)

Thanks so much, Bridgitte.. :) But I seldom post here. But yes, I have my poetry in my website at www.sanarose.com. Welcome over there. :)

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author avatar Humza
18th Jan 2012 (#)

When are u tieng the knots????

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author avatar Sana Rose
18th Jan 2012 (#)

Not decided yet. The families will be talking about it in July. But we still would have one more year to go in college. :)
I wondered who had commented. Well, who don't u join me on Facebook? Some friends from here have already met me there. :)
http://facebook.com/sanah.rose

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author avatar Humza
19th Jan 2012 (#)

Woah thats bad u forgot me..................... :(

Will wikinuts be invited???

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author avatar Sana Rose
19th Jan 2012 (#)

No, i haven't forgotten. :) I was saying, when I got an email saying 'New comment on your page', I wondered who had dropped a comment and then i saw it's you. Songbird, Buds and Johnny Dodd are there in Fb with me. Just hit search in my name, u'll find me easily. :)

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author avatar Humza
20th Jan 2012 (#)

Basically I am not on fb thats why!!!

Will we be invited on the wedding?

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author avatar Sana Rose
2nd Mar 2012 (#)

Haha, of course :) you will have to give me ur address though. Just drop me a mail in my website, so that I can give u the email address. :) Sorry for delay, have been very busy. Just go to the guestbook - message tab in www.sanarose.com :)

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