A mothers talk (poem about a girls secret she kept from her mother)

poemgur1980 By poemgur1980, 24th Nov 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/1w9dge3p/
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this poem is about my daughter who was hurt by this guy she was seeing yet never told me as her mother just lied all the time until one day her little sister told on her.

A mothers talk

terry my little baby what
made you become this way.
is this something you like to do
or don't you want to change.

Ive taught you better than this
mostly every day.
if i knew how you felt inside
i would find another way.

all that i can say is your
still my little girl.
no matter how wrong you are
i brought you in this world.

that doesn't mean it's ok for
you to keep doing what you do.
cause sooner or later you'll wish
you stopped by what they put you through.

im not always going to be around
then what would you do.
all i can say is think of my words
each time you want the truth.

the end

by:rebecca elizabeth pineda


Daughters First Love, Mother And Daughter, Mothers Heart, Mothers Love, Secret, Secret Affairs

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author avatar poemgur1980
my name is (Rebecca Elizabeth Jimenez) married name is (Pineda .)
Im 33 yrs old been writing poems since the age of 9 I write about feelings ,love,inspiration,hope all kinds of poetry

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author avatar Mark Gordon Brown
24th Nov 2013 (#)

Very touching, sometimes kids I think feel bad if a relationship ends and do not want you to feel that somehow they let you down by not keeping the relationship together, but mostly it is good for girls (and boys) to learn that it is okay to be alone sometimes and that they do not need a relationship to be whole and that their mom will always love them.

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author avatar poemgur1980
24th Nov 2013 (#)

very true your right i just wish my daughter knew better enough that she could have confided in me before or while she was hurting you know i want our relationship to be open i dont want her to have the kind of mother daughter relationship that i never got a chance my self to have but she knows i love her with all my heart and there isn't a thing in this world i wouldn't do for her or all my kids thank you mark .

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author avatar LOVERME
25th Nov 2013 (#)

As one grows and gets hurt …one feels it's worthless...to involve others whom they love… as it may them also hurt …Life of teens is such...I keep warning all of them ….all along …well done...

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author avatar poemgur1980
26th Nov 2013 (#)

yeah your so right i didnt look at it that way thanks loverme

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author avatar LOVERME
26th Nov 2013 (#)

thanks do read the full one

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