A thought i am thankful for!

Neha Dwivedi  By Neha Dwivedi , 26th Jul 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/ux7b3sck/
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some choices of life can be disturbing especially when you cannot reject them and are forced to continue with it.....

My heart

i sat there crying through out the day
as i had to accept the fact that i was a loser
i cursed myself for choosing something i just never wanted to
and perusing it as choices were few..
i cried my heart out as i could not share
my heart craved for someone who would be fair
i tried to bring out a plastic smile in front of my loved ones
but couldn't control my feelings which were taking regular turns..
i thought enough and melt my heart out to my father
he listened patiently with nothing else to bother
he asked me to have patience
as life was not a little game
which could be won and lost easily
he just asked me to have faith in my family
which would always be there with me
no matter how drowsy i may be
i wept....as i couldn't stop my tears coming out
all he did was stand there with his helpful eyes staring
he said people will choose you for your soul
and not for the cloths you are wearing
i looked at him confused , trying to understand his words
which i thought were useless
he said my loved ones will always be around me
no matter what and this line rather made my thoughts go free
he explained me about the cycle of life
saying everything will pass , all you need to do is try
and in the future when you look back
you would rather be proud of your track
i hugged him with a smile
there were still tears in my eyes
but they were of happiness, satisfaction
and that of my father's sanction

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Dad, Dad Daughter, Daddy, Daddys Girl, Life, Life Changing, Life Experience, Life Experiences, Life Journey, Life Lessons, Love, Sad, Sadness

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
Hello people ! I am a student whose aim is to become a professional writer .I love writing all kinds of stuff but what interests me the most is poetry . Hope you all enjoy my writing (Neha Dwivedi )

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author avatar Buzz
27th Jul 2011 (#)

We all have ups and downs, geeta and yes they pass as all things do. As they say, smile and the world smiles with you:) Lovely poem, my dear.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
27th Jul 2011 (#)

well your comment really bought a smile on my face....thanks a lot for commenting...

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author avatar Phoenix Montoya
27th Jul 2011 (#)

Heartwarming with the mention of your father. Beautiful lines, geeta.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
27th Jul 2011 (#)

my father is everything for me...thanks a lot for your comment...i appreciate it a lot..

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author avatar Denise O
27th Jul 2011 (#)

Your father is one intelligent man. You are one fantastic poet. Love it. Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
27th Jul 2011 (#)

this is one of the most wonderful compliment my father and i have ever received ....thanks a lot denise.....

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author avatar Socrates
27th Jul 2011 (#)

Do anything in your life Geeta but never stop writing poems, you are gifted.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
27th Jul 2011 (#)

thanks a lot for your wonderful compliment ashutosh......i really appreciate it a lot...

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author avatar jayababy
27th Jul 2011 (#)

So cute, geeta. U r highly talented. A wonderful poem.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
28th Jul 2011 (#)

oh! jaya....thanks a lot for your wonderful compliment....i appreciate it a lot..

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
27th Jul 2011 (#)

Your father's gentleness and love comes shining through your poem geeta. Great share. Thank you.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
28th Jul 2011 (#)

thank you steve....that was a beautiful compliment...

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author avatar Songbird B
28th Jul 2011 (#)

A wonderful share, Geeta, and sounds like you have the wisest of dads..Just beautiful...

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
29th Jul 2011 (#)

yes i do have songbird....thanks for your wonderful compliment...

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author avatar Spicy
29th Jul 2011 (#)

Very beautiful lines, I enjoyed each word, handsome poetry, thank you Geeta.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
30th Jul 2011 (#)

thank you spicy for the compliment compliment....

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author avatar Carol Kinsman
2nd Aug 2011 (#)

How wonderful to have such a gentle, understanding father! This was a beautiful poem. Thank you, Geeta.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
2nd Aug 2011 (#)

that was a very nice compliment carol....thank you!

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