A woman’s scorn.

johnnydodStarred Page By johnnydod, 22nd May 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/111tia6d/
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And all those Ills which thou so long hast mourn'd;
Heav'n has no Rage, like Love to Hatred turn'd,
Nor Hell a Fury, like a Woman scorn'd.

The end of a perfect evening

I drove her home and kissed her good night, “would you like to come in for a coffee Johnny” she whispered seductively? She looked over her shoulder and beckoned me in, “Go right in and make yourself comfortable”
“Humm” I thought, “Johnnydod this is going to be a pushover”
I had got away with it for such a long time, I had managed to keep both my women from finding out about the other, and I was having a ball. I poured myself a whiskey, turning round I saw the gun pointing right between my eyes

The worm turns

“At last I have you, where I want you Johnnydod. No more Miss nice girl, I am fed up to the teeth with your cheating and lying, we have come to the end of the line, and you have come to the END”
I saw her finger squeeze on the trigger, was this to be the way I would die? Suddenly I felt a cold pain on the side of my face as I was swallowed in a grey mist, I dropped to the floor.
As I lay there, the gun rolling on her finger and still smoking, she smiled and looked down at me and laughed out loud,” Huh ! This time Johnndod you have bitten off more than you can chew, I told you not to cheat on me”

Is this the end for Johnnydod?

I could feel a mist descending down on me again, and it all went black. As I laid there in a pool of blood I slowly opened my eyes, the gun in her hand still smoking.
“That’s it, Johnnydod” she growled, “that’s the last time you’ll ever cheat on me”
And with a low menacing laugh she cried, so long sucker, and she was gone, from my life for ever.

Quick on the scene the "Daily Blog"

I woke in a pool of blood with the mother of all headaches, I slowly allowed myself to regain my senses, dragging myself to my feet I could feel myself sway backwards and forwards, I steadied myself and poured a stiff shot of Scotch.
A reporter from the "Daily Blog" stood in the doorway, he started fireing questions at me, I told him some story that it had all been a mixup and got rid of him.
Cleaning myself up a bit I made my way out onto the street it must have been around seven in the evening the cold night air felt good on my face,as I hailed a taxi to my place

Read all about it

A newsvender was shouting out the evenings headlines
"Johnnydod found gunned down, read all about it, read all about it"

I throw him some change and grabbed a paper," bloody hell those reporters get their news to the papers quick" I thought, making my way up to my pad I stripped off and turned on the shower, as the warm water trickled over my body I thought. "Thats it, I think I'll stick to one woman from now on."

Just as I stepped out of the shower the phone rang, I let my answer maching answer, " Hi Johnny, do you remember me? I'm Trudy the girl you met in the bar the other night"
A smile crept across my face.........

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author avatar Pink&Blue
23rd May 2011 (#)

I love your creative mind Johnny I would just love to get in there and explore!

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author avatar johnnydod
23rd May 2011 (#)

Well now theres an offer !!

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author avatar Retired
23rd May 2011 (#)

Gah, that's disturbing. That the man, after getting supposedly shot in the face by a scorned woman apparently, still has the intrepidness to go back out with another woman almost brazenly.
It was a good read. Thanks.

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author avatar johnnydod
23rd May 2011 (#)

thanks so much

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author avatar Pink&Blue
23rd May 2011 (#)

I love it!!!

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author avatar Maria Malone
23rd May 2011 (#)

Excellent "page turning" read.

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author avatar johnnydod
23rd May 2011 (#)

Cheers Maria

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author avatar Mark Gordon Brown
23rd May 2011 (#)

geeze Johnny.. thats good stuff.

I loved the newspaper article too!

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author avatar johnnydod
23rd May 2011 (#)

Ta Mark

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author avatar Retired
23rd May 2011 (#)

Well must say women are capable of anything cannot underestimate them, especially when they are pushed over the edge....
Hope its just the Whiskey illusion with the three...

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author avatar johnnydod
23rd May 2011 (#)

Im sure it was lol

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author avatar deepa venkitesh
23rd May 2011 (#)

how did u manage the newspaper bit?

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author avatar johnnydod
23rd May 2011 (#)

Teehee my little secret

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author avatar angel
23rd May 2011 (#)

YEAH! The newspaper! Its cool!

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author avatar Denise O
23rd May 2011 (#)

Johnny, you just gotta love this. I mean, even down to the newspaper article. Entertaining, creative and just a darn good piece of art. As always, thank you for sharing, you bad boy, you.:)

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author avatar johnnydod
23rd May 2011 (#)

Ow fanks Denise

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author avatar Retired
23rd May 2011 (#)

Lol, that person posing as a lady asking for an older man. On this page of all. Isn't that just ironic and funny.

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author avatar johnnydod
23rd May 2011 (#)

lol each th their own

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author avatar Delicia Powers
23rd May 2011 (#)

Creative and teasingly daring, well done...:0)

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author avatar Carol
23rd May 2011 (#)

So much imagination, great write.

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author avatar Songbird B
24th May 2011 (#)

Cracking read, Johnny! What a gifted writer you are my friend...So impressed with newspaper report too. Love your work in all its varied forms...

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author avatar johnnydod
24th May 2011 (#)

Now your making me blush Bev

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author avatar Songbird B
24th May 2011 (#)

Credit where it is due, Johnny...But you look charming blushing too...lol

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author avatar Melissa Russell
3rd Jun 2011 (#)

Well now, did you/he get what was deserved and did you/he learn the lesson of scorn? I fear not LOL, this was good.

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author avatar johnnydod
3rd Jun 2011 (#)

I promise I will try and be a good boy in the future, Melissa,

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author avatar Roberta
14th Jun 2011 (#)

Johnny, I loved this to bits and that's the way you will be (in bits) if you carry on much longer with your womanizing. You even made headline news. I had a really good laugh, made my day.

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