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Vartika By Vartika, 9th Oct 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/3m333_kl/
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"This is probably the most devastating feeling I've ever felt. It's like a void inside, an emptiness inside that only time will heal."

~ Brandon Worthy

Days and nights of emptiness

Emptiness so profound
the bottom with no ground

searching gravity and sanity
waking up to no sound

a soulless beginning
another dreary morning
gloominess eclipsing the ray
thus becoming the day

evenings so dreadful
the skeletons of love
invading my door
memories washing ashore

craving and yearning
an era left behind
screaming in darkness
the very words rebound

emptiness so profound
the bottom with no ground



Thank you Wikimedia commons for the pic.
Thank you Wikinut for giving me the opportunity to learn.

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Emptiness, Failure, Loneliness, Lonely Nights, Lonely Poems, Mourning, Sad Love - Poem Of Love, Sad Love Story, Sad Poems About Love, Sadness, Sadness Poems

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author avatar Vartika
A self-employed professional...I enjoy studying and analyzing human behavior.
Also find my writings
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author avatar Vartika
9th Oct 2012 (#)

Thanks Johnny

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
9th Oct 2012 (#)

Tough to fill the emptiness, either temporary or permanent. Love and attachment come also with a price! Powerful poetry, Vartika - siva

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author avatar Vartika
9th Oct 2012 (#)

Thank you Mr. Siva. I almost look forward to your comments...thanks for encouraging.

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author avatar Khushboo
9th Oct 2012 (#)

Beautifully written.... love the way you write :)

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author avatar AMITA PATEL
9th Oct 2012 (#)

Vartika, you have the guts to exhibit strong emotions by only few lines. it's really really nice & touchy poem. I liked it !

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author avatar Vartika
9th Oct 2012 (#)

Amita, thank you so much. You are always generous with your praise.

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author avatar LOVERME
9th Oct 2012 (#)

SIVA ...IS A VERY POSITIVE PERSON
HE HAS THE GUTS TO GIVE ENCOURAGEMENT AND HIS VERSION
I TOO ADMIRE HIM

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author avatar DuitByJames
10th Oct 2012 (#)

Vartika, your choice of the picture is very powerful for me and connected with the feeling of emptiness so well. Thank You!

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author avatar Vartika
10th Oct 2012 (#)

Thanks James! I liked the picture too.

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author avatar vpaulose
10th Oct 2012 (#)

Nice Vartika, thanks.

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author avatar LOVERME
23rd Oct 2012 (#)

you skipped me !!hahaha

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