Another Night Alone

charmaine By charmaine, 4th Aug 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/11t9n61z/
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Another night alone in the bed Thinking of all the things you said
How much you said you loved me

Another Night Alone

Another night alone
Another night alone in the bed
Thinking of all the things you said
How much you said you loved me
How you told me to leave

I dream of you calling me in the dark night
The blinking stars so bright
Clouds of shadows sweeping past the moon
Me, hoping to see you soon

U deny your love for me
However your eyes disagree
Why are you doing this to us
You are the only one I trust

When you say goodbye and walk away
I wipe my silent tears away
You just said you will see me another day
I wanted to beg you to stay

You could not look me in the eye

I know you love me too
The same way that I love you
It is the way you hold my hand
It is the way I understand

Another night alone

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Alone, Bed, Disagree, Loved Me, Said

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author avatar charmaine
1I have been writing poetry since 1972 however never had the courage to publish. I plan to write a book soon. My poetry is not fiction but true happenings in my life

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
5th Aug 2013 (#)

Traverse through life slow and steady - patience, understanding and it takes two. It is give and take - not one giving and the other just taking! siva

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author avatar LOVERME
5th Aug 2013 (#)

Letting them go
when you really love someone
give them the opportunity
to go whenever
with whom so ever
someone

if they go they didn’t deserve you
and
if they come back they know the error
so committed

forgive them but let them stay away
you are not just any commodity
I pray be brave
and
face the world your own way

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author avatar charmaine
5th Aug 2013 (#)

A lovely poem. Just the thought of him dying isn't' a nice one
.I do believe I will recover and smile and write happy poetry again thank you for your comment I appreciate it

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author avatar Retired
5th Aug 2013 (#)

I see a 'total betrayal & with drawal' in your poem..it is so very sad that relationships sour to that extent

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
5th Aug 2013 (#)

I have to agree with LOVERME here Charmaine .... to a degree , yes , let go , yes forgive ... but seek counsel and help , for your own good , and for the way ahead . Rejection and betrayal are terrible burdens to carry alone .
God bless you
Stella

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author avatar charmaine
5th Aug 2013 (#)

I have been in several institutions for counseling and diagnosed with bipolar i decided I was strong enough to cope without drugs and feeling better. so I am rather proud of myself taking the big step

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author avatar charmaine
5th Aug 2013 (#)

I have been in several institutions for counseling and diagnosed with bipolar i decided I was strong enough to cope without drugs and feeling better. so I am rather proud of myself taking the big step

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