Another stream

DiRaega By DiRaega, 16th Feb 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/13begjy3/
Posted in Wikinut>Writing>Poetry

just a stream of consciousness sort of thing really.

Here we go...

Pedantry is petty but heavenly, don’t be seduced by the way that these words and rhymes lie, twist and squirm. they’re organic. Mistakes might take place but it’s like a race, A panic attack of spontaneity begging me to set them free. And so I oblige, and with arms open wide I reach inside and pluck at strands, like bands stretched between my fingers, neither planned nor landing necessarily well. But all the same, my brain trains hard and endeavors to keep a second ahead, a line ahead, a word ahead of the keys I’m typing, or the sounds I’m making, the notes I’m hitting or the drum skins I’m shaking. Don’t pick apart what I’ve started, there’s no heart in poring over the first draft with a critical eye, that’s my job, and you should wait until it’s shown, blown out with the breeze along with these other seeds of thought. Give me some time, just a bit more time to refine what’s mine until I’m satisfied that the rhyming scheme fits my dream of it, satisfied that I’ve tried, and more besides, to do all that I can for it. Then I’ll cast it out, a tentative whisper, rising to a shout in the final moments as it peaks and then fades away, fades away into the blissful warmth of a comfortable silence.

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Poetry, Poetry And Rhyme, Poetry Prose, Rap, Rhyme, Rhymes, Stream, Stream Of Consciousness, Writing

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author avatar DiRaega
I am a professional drum tutor. I like writing random stories and nonsense comes to me quite easily.

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