As Penetrating as a Laser and Sweet Like a Fresh Berry

Funom Makama By Funom Makama, 8th Feb 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/43n2-sdd/
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It's the season of Love and Valentine is here. I have been thinking of a Love Poem. But the inspiration was not forth coming. But when I read Songs of Solomon (the Love Poem) of the Bible, I got some Love anointing there and within some minutes, I was able to compose something worth reading. I hope it's nice.

Introduction!

This poem is about two group of people: the sisters (Ladies) and the brothers (Guys). It is not an interactive poem per say, but just a straight one where the brothers first read (or sang) theirs, then the sisters replied. The brothers, emphasizing on how wonderful Love is, expressing the way they feel, act and think when loving. The sisters, so impressed sang about how Love has no alternatives, unlike other goodness and pleasures of Life. So enjoy it!

From the Brothers!

Living in a dysney World without Hurt,
hatred trashed and smashed in the Oven,
as our feelings bring us closer.

Shown Kindness, explicit and Proven,
earning each other's emotional Visa,
not caring if the benefits are even,
because this can never be real to a miser.

Wish you smile

Counting our blessings at seven,
as we pray it penetrates to all like a laser.
and wish you smile and be at eleven.

Holding Hands, knowing no one is a Loser,
as our minds and thoughts are interwoven.
Shielding our bare with one Blazer
proves what our Hearts speak of is LOVE.

From the Sisters!

Pouring out to each and every dearie
enjoying Life's alternatives
and tasting each merry.

Walloping in the satisfaction
of a fleshy, stony cherry,
with the comfort of an option
in a Berry.

Grasping the breath of goodness
as we sail through Nature's ferry.
Baptizing a child and naming him Perry.
Not good enough? We still have Jerry.

Its Waters has no Limits!

But there is no alternative to Love
which makes Humanity a fairy.
Binding us together into one unit
needing each other every minute.

As we all drink from its waters
which has absolutely no limit.
Under its will, we commit
as our hearts beat for it.
Up, down, left, right, front and back-all for Love

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Alternatives, Berry, Bible, Blazer, Blessings, Cherry, Dysney, Exploit, Fairy, Ferry, Humanity, Hurt, Interwoven, Jerry, Kindness, Limit, Loser, Love, Merry, Minute, Miser, Perry, Poem, Satisfaction, Smash, Trash, Unit, Valentines Day, Visa

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author avatar Funom Makama
A medical Practitioner and a passionate writer. A proud published Author of 2 books, more than 2,000 articles online and 500 Poems!
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author avatar Denise O
9th Feb 2012 (#)

Wow! Talk about loving it. Yes, I am loving it! The photos are hot, they so work. The poem is a brilliant work of art. I love the title! Just one suggestions on tags, add: Valentine's day, love, poem, bible.
Just a lovely piece of art. Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar Lambasted
9th Feb 2012 (#)

What more can I say? A genius never hides...

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author avatar Funom Makama
9th Feb 2012 (#)

thanks dear

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author avatar pretty_writer
20th Feb 2012 (#)

NEVER!~~~ Not in Funom Makama's case!

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author avatar Funom Makama
9th Feb 2012 (#)

Thank you so much Denise O. I have heeded to your advice and added the tags as well...
Thanks a lot

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
9th Feb 2012 (#)

Beautiful poetry, Dr Funom Makama!

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author avatar Lambasted
9th Feb 2012 (#)

I can remember this one

http://writing.wikinut.com/All-I-want-is-your-love/1m87zlk6/

Thanks Funom.

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author avatar Funom Makama
9th Feb 2012 (#)

Thank you Rathnasthikamani.... Its been a while

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author avatar Buzz
9th Feb 2012 (#)

Awesome poetry, Funom! Great images too! Thanks for sharing, my friend!

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author avatar Funom Makama
9th Feb 2012 (#)

You know Buzz!~~~ When I have people like you, I know and I am sure, I will do great here... Thanks for your encouragement.

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author avatar pretty_writer
9th Feb 2012 (#)

I am definitely using this as a valentine's gift to my Bubu.

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author avatar Delicia Powers
10th Feb 2012 (#)

Very wonderful indeed...your poem style is knew and you...I like the word pictures you paint using the tone and meaning of words like the colors of a picture....blending and become a poem of such rare beauty...I enjoy your work Funom thank you.

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author avatar Sheila Newton
10th Feb 2012 (#)

You were robbed my darling. The way you put together this article - and the amazing images you use are so worthy of a star page. You've put a lot into this page obviously - and i reckon you should have got your just rewards.
This is just breath-taking. And the content is so well-written. Thank you, Funom.

When you gonna visit me, kind sir?????

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author avatar Funom Makama
10th Feb 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot Sheila Newton... My pages have always been moderated by Mark Gordon Brown and he is the hardest of all moderators to be impressed. So, its okay by me, the most important thing here is to pass on my messages and information and be able to affected Lives, even if it is just a smile.

I thought I visited your page some days back!~~~ Not to worry, I will do so immediately.

@Delicia Powers~~ Thank you so much for your encouraging comments.

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author avatar Dr. Shazad
10th Feb 2012 (#)

Wow!~~ I never knew you write Poems.. I think I need to be following you now.

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author avatar Funom Makama
10th Feb 2012 (#)

Thank you so much Dr. Shazad!

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author avatar Ivyevelyn, R.S.A.
11th Feb 2012 (#)

I can just think of saying, "an emotionally-charged" poem.
Well written and I enjoyed the pictures. Thank you, Funom.

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author avatar Patience Akuson
13th Feb 2012 (#)

You did great with the pictures, the poem is cool.
I am challenged.

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author avatar Funom Makama
13th Feb 2012 (#)

Yeah!~~~ I hope u take up the challenge and start the road to ur greatness!

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author avatar Vera
14th Feb 2012 (#)

wow!! really inspiring.And the pictures are heart warming. Love Is So magical.nice one Funom

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author avatar Funom Makama
14th Feb 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot my dear....

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author avatar Abrry
14th Feb 2012 (#)

i love the smiling monkeys....nice one Bro!

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author avatar Funom Makama
15th Feb 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
20th Feb 2012 (#)

YES! a terrific article and the pics are great..well done young man!

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author avatar Emmanuel Opaluwa
20th Feb 2012 (#)

This poem has always bin a source of inspiration and many times as I go thru it.
I just wanna thank you for making urself available to become a blessing us. May the Almighty Increase ur richly. Amen...

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author avatar Funom Makama
20th Feb 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot cnwriter and Emmanuel

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author avatar Lambasted
20th Feb 2012 (#)

Happy Valentine in arrears.. Just cannot stop loving this.

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author avatar Funom Makama
20th Feb 2012 (#)

thanks a lot Lambasted and pretty Writer... As usual-giving me many 2 points.

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author avatar Priscilla tawai
24th Feb 2012 (#)

wow...........i really enjoyed every beat of it...........i lyk d fleshy sweet cherries

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author avatar Gracious
24th Feb 2012 (#)

wow....ok, first i must say that that the second pic. is hilarious and nice pictures all through.i love it.

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author avatar Egbes
24th Feb 2012 (#)

nice write up.. it's really inspirational.

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author avatar Funom Maakama
24th Feb 2012 (#)

Thanks pretty Angels.. You've made my day.....

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author avatar Egbes
24th Feb 2012 (#)

i'm blushing.

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author avatar Barine Nakwaasah
2nd Mar 2012 (#)

You are so good. Keep this up!

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author avatar Funom Makama
5th Mar 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot and welcome to wikinut

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