Tin Can By Tin Can, 7th Apr 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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My relaxation time is in my bath. I eat, drink, watch movies, listen to music, come up with ideas, ponder, dwell, dream, reminisce, and wish, in my bath.


In my bath the water is really hot.
Cold water in my bath...? I like, but not a lot.
For on immersion I like the pain,
As on insertion, it synapses the brain,
And I loose all track of time in a shot.

The geezer is on for no less than an hour,
The temperature makes me tingle and cower.
Then the process of adding the scent,
Makes me smell magnificent,
Much better than having a shower.

I've added plenty of salt, foam and creme
To infuse my very being.
Bath salts and foam will only ever moan,
If you ignore them or leave them alone,
So I allow them to take part in the theme.

Once I'm deep within,
And the heat is burning my skin,
I've nowhere to hide,
So can only swallow my pride
And wait for the cooling to kick in.

As I slowly insert my bot,
The bath water is way too hot,
And this hour long soak,
Is really no joke,
And laughing you'll find me not.

But there to my delight
My tab I see is in sight.
Therefore not to fret,
I'll watch my favourite box set,
As I stretch to put out the light.

Once the episode is over and done,
The heat I've overcome,
Go to sleep I really must not.
For my body is ever so hot,
I must watch out for hypertension.


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My poetry tend to veer towards feelings of emotion. Love. Sex. Desire. Most of my verses will reflect these sentiments as I mainly write straight from the heart. 31 Jan 15.

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13th Apr 2015 (#)

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author avatar WOGIAM
13th Apr 2015 (#)

I wish i had the time to enjoy a leisurely bath time, i am in and out in a jiffy. lol

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author avatar Tin Can
13th Apr 2015 (#)

You need to possibly choose the time just before going to bed.

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