Be-Attitudes...Attitudes of Being Are...

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 25th Sep 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/337src1w/
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Well going overboard maybe for some...just a look at What Is...not the stuff we have been fed for so long now...and painting a picture of so called true love twixt two... and all that crap....

What to see

People on journey back home
Find each other
Different strokes for different folks
Aimless most

Eyes wide open
Seeing only what they wish to see
Been going on for so long now
To and fro they go

Tricky Dicky
Slothful Sally
Meet maybe in small cafe
Eye each other tremulously

Was it once or no...

Hearts of glass ready to break
One single harsh word
Makes it so
Then onto another they do go

If you loved me
Would not do that
If you cared
Not treat me so

This all the time by lovers heard
As over mobiles they do glare
At each other
No longer love is shared

Perhaps never been

For what...

At his feet she kneels
Eyes gaze up at him so tenderly
Silly lady
Knows not what she is in for...

His hand stretched out
Gathering in
The one he always loved
Kith and kin...

When as a child he saw her beauty
Wanted her from that day on
Finally his wish came true
Married her

Blame...ha!

More than that so convoluted
In a liar's world he lived
Smoke and illusion
Ways for him
Like so many men...

Blame often lies at women's door
They too so often circumvent
Trying hard to be
Someone they are not

Mixture oft do become
Of opinions others share
Forgotten whom they truly are

Here today..gone tomorrow..

Through this miasma
Find your way
Take time out to ponder on
If you will

Many move so rapidly
Never know what is going on
Here today
Tomorrow gone

and so it is....

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
26th Sep 2014 (#)

one to put in a pipe and smoke...ha!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
26th Sep 2014 (#)

and thank you Peter too...i think this is my 900th page here...

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author avatar snerfu
26th Sep 2014 (#)

mysterious and moving cnwriter great work

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
26th Sep 2014 (#)

many thanks snerfu...

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
26th Sep 2014 (#)

Relationships - figuring them out, learning how to be in them without descending to co-dependence - that's what it's all about, n'est-ce pas? Great star page my friend.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
26th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you dear Steve...

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
26th Sep 2014 (#)

Awesome post Carito, you rock love!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
26th Sep 2014 (#)

many thanks Fern...

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author avatar spirited
26th Sep 2014 (#)

we all walk through such trenches when we become too fixated on being made mobile by our mobile. We are more than just facebook faces.

Get more real I feel is your message here, thanks carolina

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
26th Sep 2014 (#)

i hope so spirited...

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author avatar Red Smith
26th Sep 2014 (#)

Love it!
Thanks for sharing... awesome pictures....

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
26th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you Red...

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author avatar Retired
26th Sep 2014 (#)

Ah, finally the time to get lost again in your work this morning, brilliant one. Wandering, pondering, listening to Eleanor Rigby (one of my faves), gazing at the photos, drinking in the words. You just put them down so well. Thank you, thank you ...

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
26th Sep 2014 (#)

oh wow again Susan...thank you again again for such comment...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
26th Sep 2014 (#)

Keep it simple - serves us well and be truthful too - we can't be acting beyond a point - we just get tired, others too. Thanks dear Carolina for a sublime message - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
26th Sep 2014 (#)

it is the One within that writes dear Siva...blessings...

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author avatar WOGIAM
26th Sep 2014 (#)

Weldone for another unique article, you are yourself and this makes you and your work stand out.

Congrats, Carolina

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
26th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you Wogiam for 'seeing'...blessings to you too...

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
26th Sep 2014 (#)

My husband and I have the good fortune to be able to eat lunch together sometimes. And sometimes I put my phone down -- and sometimes he does. Sigh. We are such devils of ourselves. On the flip side, though, when he is working and I want to connect, a quick text brings us closer together. The harm is in our thinking and actions, not the technology! ;)
Another great poem, dear!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
26th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you Phyl...

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author avatar n.c.radomes
27th Sep 2014 (#)

Inspiring work as always dear Carolina; thanks for sharing.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
27th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you too dear n.c.

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author avatar Nicholas
27th Sep 2014 (#)

The transience and emphemerality of life is so well depicted by you here.
I felt I was on a shuttle seeing more and more changes with every look at where I was
Keep these amazing pieces coming!
Loving

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
27th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you dear one....

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author avatar Utah Jay
28th Sep 2014 (#)

You have a way of finding just the right music and pictures to fit your words...Kudos.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
28th Sep 2014 (#)

many thanks dear Utah...

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author avatar Kingwell
5th Oct 2014 (#)

Relationships are difficult here.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
6th Oct 2014 (#)

always...

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author avatar AjaySinghChauhan
25th Oct 2014 (#)

interesting post and thanks for sharing it with us

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author avatar AjaySinghChauhan
25th Oct 2014 (#)

interesting post and thanks for sharing it with us

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