Between Chaos and Clutter

j.m. raymond By j.m. raymond, 7th Feb 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Sometimes moving the furniture is the easiest part.

Between Chaos and Clutter

Chaos is one of the old world words
embracing nothing yet encompassing everything;
its ancient Greek form magically more powerful
than today's distilled, diluted usage.
In the old world, chaos confirmed vacant,
unfathomable space.

Fifteen years in one place creates
a tremendous cluster of clutter,
more than things to move.
Overloaded cardboard containers
stacked higher than my head threaten
to attack the floor with their disorganized
contents scattering disarray to be retrieved
at a time not yet known.

A toaster resides in its new location,
the cord dangling, disconnected.
All the elements of domestic tranquility,
toys, computers, crystal goblets, books
have yet to find a proper resting place.

The new house is currently cluttered.
The old house sits empty and vacant.
The drive home with nothing
but time and memories
is Chaos.


Home, Memories, Moving

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author avatar j.m. raymond
Satire, humor and fiction are my primary interests, although occasionally, I make forays into the worlds of technology and small business management.
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author avatar Retired
8th Feb 2011 (#)

very nice work.

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author avatar Retired
10th Feb 2011 (#)

good job!

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author avatar Denise O
3rd Mar 2011 (#)

I have to say you have pegged it just right. Nice read.
Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
8th Mar 2011 (#)

An excellent poem!

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author avatar j.m. raymond
8th Mar 2011 (#)

Thank you, folks! I appreciate the reads and the comments.

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author avatar Bridgitte Williams
1st Dec 2011 (#)

LOL, enjoyed. I tend to be happiest in a cluttered home...hehe. I am following you. :-)

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author avatar j.m. raymond
14th Dec 2011 (#)

Thanks, Bridgitte. Glad you enjoyed it. Returning the follow.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
30th Nov 2014 (#)

We tend to accumulate things and moving homes is the way to get them out of the way and to rethink our priorities from time to time. Good poem that resonates with all - siva

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