Blue Ice

Shirley Shuler By Shirley Shuler, 1st Apr 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Cold, unbroken pieces of ice, unforgiving relentless ice

Blue Ice

Cold, unbroken pieces
All about your illusions
Standing before cold eyes
Giving nothing away
Pretending to be what you cannot be
Warm soul on ice
Wrapped in layers of shame
Wallowing in your own despair
Despising the face you represent
Pressure mounting, each moment is threatening
The pillars are tossed and blowing
Mind hanging in the balance
Raw, emotional feelings, chilling and killing
Blue ice, melting in the dark

Black Pearl

Black pearl of beauty
Sitting high, looking low
Poetry in motion
Resting proudly on nature's limb
A treat for the eye to see

Tags

Despair, Despising, Illusions, Shame, Threatening

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author avatar Shirley Shuler
I love writing poetry and short stories

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author avatar Delicia Powers
1st Apr 2013 (#)

Very visual...thank you..

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author avatar Shirley Shuler
1st Apr 2013 (#)

Thank you, Delicia for your kind comment :)

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
14th Apr 2013 (#)

Yes, very strong sentiments . Well done .
Blessings
Stella ><

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author avatar Shirley Shuler
15th Apr 2013 (#)

Thank you, Stella for your comment.

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author avatar Songbird B
12th May 2013 (#)

Amazing imagery..I could almost feel that ice through your words..I am so enjoying your work Shirley..\0/x

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author avatar Shirley Shuler
14th May 2013 (#)

You are such a treasure, Songbird, thank you...hugs

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