Bottom of the Hill

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 23rd Oct 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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Soemtimes you only have to reach that place where your inner demons and dark thoughts roam freely.

Dark Place

Drowning into a lake
made of bitter tears,
I spent such a long time.
Without giving it a second thought,
I start going down,
trying to make it
to the dark place
where my demons
hide away from the sun
As I reach the bottom of the hill,
my knees feel so weak,
spending a long time
trying to get there,
has left me
feeling so tired.
In the distance,
I hear a little noise
that does sounds
like the voice of death
calling me out.
A little part of me
really wants to follow
that dark voice,
but deep inside I know
is not time to go.
The only way to escape
seemed to close my eyes
until the end of time,
But now that I finally hit
the dark bottom
of my life,
I can see that
not everything is over.

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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