Breathless

Amber By Amber, 29th Jan 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/sp.3j59t/
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I was talking to a friend about her dad and I this came to mind. i know it not clear but i like it.

Breathless

If there were words to speak
i have already said them
if your were to die
i would have no regrets
i have tried to make peace
but in your eyes there was nothing
once you were so high and now
i wish i had never came for you
to do this over would be
…..
i wouldn't change a thing
threw all the hard thoughts
the indifferent feelings i bared
you have some how taught me more that i care to share
i bit thee goodnight.

(based of true life and feeling. i wrote this while talking to the person who lived this life)

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Dad Daughter, Daddy, Hate, Hate You, Lost, Lost Love, Love, Loved Ones, Sad Poetry, Sadness

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author avatar Amber
HI, I'm Amber and though i have dyslexia i love to read and wright. i have considered myself a writer from the age of 16 on. I love what i do and i dont care if you like my stuff or not. oddly i do want to know why you do or do not. i dont care what ...(more)

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author avatar mountainside
30th Jan 2011 (#)

Hi there, Thought provoking piece. Take care.

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author avatar Artur Victoria
30th Jan 2011 (#)

Thanks for sharing!

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