Bustle The Feeble

j.m. raymond By j.m. raymond, 6th Aug 2010 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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This piece was written from a word bank -- a list of words and a challenge issued to create a piece from them. The word list that inspired this piece is: Enchanted Feeble Trace Toward Intense Bustle Assertion Communion Crest Inaudible Pretentious Amount Brawny Thirst

Bustle the Feeble, intense, pretentious
lost in the Enchanted Lore.
Thirst for knowledge unabated,
always looking toward
the Crest of Greatness;
power, glory, inaudible communion
forever in an unending amount.

Wizards with words, virile or deceased,
inspire his assertion
that he might sometime coax magic
with trace of letter on
paper. But alas,
thoughts brawny - coarse, unrefined -
do not that magic make.

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author avatar smoothoperator
7th Aug 2010 (#)

Do I need a Dictionary? Take it easy. Just joking. Hard work does not go unnoticed.

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author avatar C. Michael Davis
8th Aug 2010 (#)

Very good. I see more and more of this form of communication taking place between kids at school. It is similar to rap. It is also similar to the older method of communication...telegrams. Hope all is well with you. Michael

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author avatar snooky
9th Aug 2010 (#)

Hot diggity dog,
It took a minute,
but I got through the fog.
This was very enjoyable.

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