But I want to stay in your heart

RathnashikamaniStarred Page By Rathnashikamani, 4th Sep 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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I thought I can stay in your heart, honestly.
Can I seek a place in your kind heart?

There's always something to say


I don't know
what to write
but I want to write

Why I don't know
what to write
is 'coz
I don't know what to say

But I want to say
something and also write
as I can't,for long, keep quite

I want to write something as a poem

I want to write something as a poem
but I don't know what I'm

I think I'm not a poet
but I can't just leave it like that

And I think I can write a poem
and call myself a poet, NOT that I'm

Though I've my own emotions to share
I don't express and care to dare

And a poet here is given all the freewill
so I'll share all that I can spill
Until you tell me to stop
But I don't think I can really stop

But I want to stay in your heart

For, there's always something to say
though I wish I don't want to display
my thinking in this way
and there's never another way
than saying again and again
what others would also say

There's no way that I can escape
this, that every one of us do, to know
what's there in others' minds
and that only to curiously oneself finds

And still I don't want to say
anymore, but I want to stay
in your heart

though you may want to say go away



Image credits:
but I want to write: By Amazone7 via Wikimedia Commons

I think I'm not a poet: By DIMITRIDIMENSION, via Wikimedia Commons

But I want to stay in your heart: By Margret Hofheinz-Döring/ Galerie Brigitte Mauch Göppingen via Wikimedia Commons
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author avatar Retired
4th Sep 2011 (#)

Interesting wording....thanks for sharing....

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
21st Sep 2011 (#)

Thank you, Starrleena Magyck.

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
4th Sep 2011 (#)

Very nice. Thank you Rathnashikamani.

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author avatar jayababy
4th Sep 2011 (#)

Excellent Infatuation!.

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author avatar Retired
4th Sep 2011 (#)

looks like you have a wonderful poem depicting inner turmoil of heart and mind

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author avatar juny
4th Sep 2011 (#)

I like that line...I want to stay in your heart...

Nice poem :)

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author avatar Buzz
4th Sep 2011 (#)

Great, great poetry, my friend! Namaste.

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author avatar Sheila Newton
4th Sep 2011 (#)

I love the way, in a few of the lines, you finish the line 'up in the air' with ' ...I'm...'
That is SO clever of you,Rathnashikamani.

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author avatar Retired
4th Sep 2011 (#)

I like this!

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author avatar Retired
5th Sep 2011 (#)

Don't stop!~ :) Nice, raw and real sharing.

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author avatar Delicia Powers
6th Sep 2011 (#)

Wonderful and so very expressive....

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author avatar Songbird B
7th Sep 2011 (#)

Totally heartfelt in every word...so beautiful...

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author avatar Maria Malone
7th Sep 2011 (#)

Thank you for expressing so nicely what so many feel!

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author avatar Denise O
15th Sep 2011 (#)

I AM SORRY ABOUT THE CAPS BUT, THE KEYBOARD IS NOW STUCK ON IT. LOL
I AM BORROWED MY SON'S COMPUTER, SINCE MINE FRIED COMPLETELY A FEW WEEKS BACK. I KNEW IF I USED HIS COMPUTER, I WOULD MESS SOMETHING UP AND AS YOU CAN CLEARLY SEE, I DID. AS USUAL, UGH!LOL
I LOVE THE TURMOIL IN YOUR WORDS, IT REALLY ADDS TO THE TURMOIL YOU ARE CLEARLY FEELING WITH THE ONE YOU WANT TO BE IN THEIR HEART. WELL DONE, AS USUAL. THANK YOU FOR SHARING.:)

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author avatar Retired
18th Sep 2011 (#)

I like the simplicity of your writing. It's written beautifully with your skills focusing your emotions and feelings flowing within your heart. as Romance is one of my favorite topics of poetry, I really enjoyed reading your poem.

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author avatar Shirley Ann
19th Sep 2011 (#)

Yes there is always something for a poet to say because we have countless tears inside.

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author avatar Vernazoa
21st Sep 2011 (#)

Rath, I love your work. I expect to read more!

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author avatar kishore kumar.s
5th Oct 2011 (#)

I want to say and i am saying this this poem always stay in my heart . very lovely

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