Can you tell me why?

juny By juny, 4th Oct 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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You left me suddenly with an orphaned heart, wandering in the darkness of misery.
Feeling the harsh of unflavored heartache; and tasted the savor of desperation.

Please tell me you will stay!

Tell me why once again


Tell me where my heart goes, now that you are gone.
Tell me what will be my tomorrow, now that you have erased our yesterdays.
Tell me about dreams, now that you have left with the future.
Tell me about promises, now that you broke my whole being.

Tell me why..

Why, when the sun rises and shines in me.
Why, when this happiness brings smile each day?
Why, when the world rejoices with me?
Why, when I found you and complete the emptiness of me.

I hope you will stay.

I hope that once again I saw you.
I hope that once again let me hear your heart beat for me.
I hope that once again let me embrace you.
I hope that once again let me love you.


You left me suddenly with an orphaned heart, wandering in the darkness of misery.
Feeling the harsh of unflavored heartache; and tasted the savor of desperation.

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Love And Desire, Love And Soul, Love At First Sight, Love Poem, Love Poetry, Love Romance Definition What Is It, Love Story

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author avatar juny
I am your simple neighbor who lives next door,also loves to write short poem.
A music addict and a hopeless romantic who believes that love is like a fairy tale.

"jhyn"

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author avatar Retired
6th Oct 2011 (#)

Look above and you will see me fly,
I wipe your tears and touch the sky.
For in Love, I hold you close,
Hand in hand, Toes on Toes.

For you are to be the little child,
Beautiful enarmoured and defiled.
By Evil games of Mortal art,
Hurt and reviled from the start.

You are a child beautiful and true,
Lending this world a wondrous hue.
Get up and put the past behind,
They are to their fate consigned.

For they never should have hurt you child,
Plucked and prodded with meek and mild.

For you are the child in tender arms,
Its our duty to keep you safe from harms.
Don't look back at the love thats gone,
It will break you down leave you forlorn.

Look beyond and see the light,
Keep the Creation all within sight.
For in the beyond there is hope,
Gift of happiness that helps you cope.

For you have loved with a pure heart,
It oozes out from your written art.
Now stand up, awake open your eyes,
Smile forever, for its now he who cries.

The man who hurt you will now cry for all the hurt and pain that he has caused you but you have to look beyond and into the light of tomorrow as there is where you will find peace and happiness in what you are searching for. I have done this and I feel great today.... :-)
Take care, girl, you have a shoulder to cry on if you need one....

By Anisha Achankunju (Aiyanna/Thr3e) (C) 6th October 2011

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author avatar juny
6th Oct 2011 (#)

hello Aiyanna,

Thanks for the lovely poem and for these kind words :)

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author avatar Carol
6th Oct 2011 (#)

This is a haunting poem ,very sad, but perfectly expressed the sadness that is left behind when someone goes. Thank you so much.

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author avatar juny
6th Oct 2011 (#)

hello Carol,

Thanks for the compliments ma'm :)

have a good day :)

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author avatar Sheila Newton
6th Oct 2011 (#)

I love it all - but I especially like the section - 'tell me why?' Brilliant.

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author avatar juny
6th Oct 2011 (#)

Thanks a lot for the appreciation Sheila :)

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author avatar Delicia Powers
9th Oct 2011 (#)

Very heartfelt and lovely oballesansano...

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author avatar juny
10th Oct 2011 (#)

hello Delicia,

Thanks for the kind words and appreciation ma'm :)

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author avatar Ivyevelyn, R.S.A.
14th Oct 2011 (#)

I guess most of us have been through this kind of loss. The fact that you can write about it is good therapy. Keep writing, dear..
Through your writing, you are loved. Ivyevelyn.

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author avatar Songbird B
5th Nov 2011 (#)

So heartfelt, and hauntingly sad..

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

Life does not come easy but we have to plod on looking ahead; sad but realistic poem - siva

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