Cause If you leave Me

juny By juny, 10th Sep 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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hello Moderator,

This is my original creation and is already published in my other sites (mypage and mylot)

When You Leave Me

I swallowed my pride and forget humiliation when I begged you to stay.
I never knew the feeling of insult when I kneeled down and you turned away.
My mind denied accepting any truth that your love faded and you want me out of your way.
Where love has gone, if you knew please tell me and I will chase with the wind to bring it back with me.


I wonder where did I gone wrong, I wonder where I belong.
Have you ever given me a room in your heart, or you just took me for granted to fill your emptiness.
Did you ever given me a place in your life or you just took me for a while, to fill your desires.
Having me like a possession, like a display that can be thrown when there is no value anymore.


The moment you closed the door, I saw my world crashed before my very eyes.
When your shadow faded, my life fell into an unending pitch of darkness.
You shut my heart like closing a book, leaving it unread, left unpublished.
You left me with shattered dreams, broken heart unjustified and a life meaningless.



Promises in vain, love is not real but in disguise. I don’t know to stop feeling this way!

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Broken Dreams, Broken Heart, Relationships

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author avatar juny
I am your simple neighbor who lives next door,also loves to write short poem.
A music addict and a hopeless romantic who believes that love is like a fairy tale.

"jhyn"

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author avatar Buzz
10th Sep 2011 (#)

Very beautiful. I'm speechless.

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author avatar juny
10th Sep 2011 (#)

hello Buzz,

Thanks for the appreciation always and have a good day :)

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author avatar Shreeja
10th Sep 2011 (#)

wow, very touchy and beautifully expressed in words..:)

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author avatar juny
10th Sep 2011 (#)

hello Shreeja,

Thanks for always reading and your kind words :)

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author avatar jayababy
11th Sep 2011 (#)

Wonderful poem.

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author avatar juny
11th Sep 2011 (#)

hello jayababy,

Thanks for the appreciation and have a good day :)

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author avatar Delicia Powers
11th Sep 2011 (#)

Powerful and lovely oballesansano!

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author avatar juny
11th Sep 2011 (#)

hello Delicia,

Thanks always ma'm :)

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
21st Sep 2011 (#)

Your poems are so lovely and touching.

"The moment you closed the door, I saw my world crashed before my very eyes" What a poetic expression!


"When your shadow faded, my life fell into an unending pitch of darkness."
Excellent imagery.

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author avatar juny
22nd Sep 2011 (#)

Hello Rathna,

Thanks a lot for the compliments :)

Have a good day :)

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