Close your eyes

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 21st Jun 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Just close your eyes for a moment, and let the most warm calm fill your tired soul.


Listening to silent day
A soul was calmed,
Keeping the fears at the bay,
Wishing to be saved.

The fear was now gone,
Letting the sun shine,
From morning until down,
Until everything is fine.

There is no need to talk
About painful things
That caused us such shock,
Confusing us with cruel swings.

Sweet realm of peace
That healed past wounds,
Marking hurt to cease
In only a few seconds.

A very calm heartbeat
Clears away the sadness,
A soothing melody
That carries an eternal promise.

Just close your eyes
And count to three.
The sun is about to rise.
You are free.

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Calm, Day, Eyes, Night, Poem, Poetry, Relax, Sleep, Verse

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar brendamarie
21st Jun 2015 (#)

I really love this poem. You work is all great.

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author avatar Helen Thomas
24th Jun 2015 (#)

Beautiful and inspiring
~ purpletears. Love it.

Thanks for sharing.

Blessings to you!

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
24th Jun 2015 (#)

Blessings to you too, Helen :)

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