Creation, Chaos, the Microscosm..Where will You Fit...

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 19th May 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Chaos ruled in the Beginning but out of that came Forms and Beings. This piece details just some of that.


It goes beyond time
It goes beyond space
It goes further than all
You could imagine

An opening appearing in the dark starry sky
A black hole deep
A passage into another dimension
An alternate universe
Running parallel with earth but not of its kind

Images on the Path

The air funnels round as you travel there
Amorphous shapes they take
Becoming what your imagination builds
Fragments of lace
Intermixed with glistening light
Forming icicles

Into the blinding sun you run
Nowhere to hide this time
The time of hiding has gone by for you

Refletions mirrored...

Now like a mirror shining brightly
Your reflection you can see
An image once ugly beyond measure now beautiful
For all who journey on this path
Their past is gone
New beginnings have begun
No ugliness to be seen
Beauty gleams inside and out


A crysalis it forms
Iceblue with purple hues
No arms
No legs
No face
A form alone
Not man
Nor beast

In ItSelf

Streams of of patterned microcosms
Fitting together one on one
Colours intricate
In detail
In form
One enormous Being making
In the cosmos quite alone
Not so
It is the knowing upon knowing
Upon knowing of itself

Not needing any other for completion
Perfect in every detail
Perfect in plan
The perfect plan from Divinity
Made manifest in man

and so it is


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Rudolph Steiner and John Roger for showing me how to delve deep inside myself.

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thank you Julie for the pics


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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
20th May 2012 (#)

thank you Peter for moderating this so quickly and giving me a star for such a very strange piece!!!

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
20th May 2012 (#)

Another imaginative work that leaves us in wonder of creation. Thanks dear cnw. We are not even specks in the whole scheme of things, but still with a role to play and leave our little footprints - siva

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author avatar Pradeep Kumar B
20th May 2012 (#)

Wonderful poem about creation. Thank you.

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author avatar Md Rezaul Karim
20th May 2012 (#)

But why should the paintings of the women be a naked one? Your imaginations flying high and the poses of arts are great, I rather suggest to paint women with clothes, that's good looking. Excuse me if I sound like stupid.
Otherwise, everything is fine and I do not have doubt about your talent. Thank you anyway.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
20th May 2012 (#)

oh well Md...I love the female form it is so beautiful and if I could find mens I would also use do not sound stupid at all, just voicing your opinion which I respect...

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author avatar Christine Crowley
21st May 2012 (#)

Just lovely - I enjoyed this.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
21st May 2012 (#)

thank you Christine...

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