Daffodils

Georgios A.V. By Georgios A.V., 1st Nov 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Two Triolets in one, Iambic tetrameter, French style. L4 is not the same as L1, intentionally.

Daffodils

Un vert soldat returns from war,
in green vast spreads and daffodils,
with bees to buzz above the gore,
he bleeds in haze from deathly bore,
dropping red drops on weeds and flor',
euphoric feed this ground of kills,
Un vert soldat returns from war,
in green vast spreads and daffodils,

O maker of the bees and flow'rs,
this is the field he run when small,
with birds on trees singing to stars,
the buzzing bees don't know of wars,
amid the souls that take this course,
utopian was his standing tall,
O maker of the bees and flow'rs,
this is the field he run when small.

© 2012, All Rights Reserved

Un vert soldat = A young soldier in French

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Bees, Daffodils, Death, Life, Soldier, Triolet, War, Wounded Soldier

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author avatar vpaulose
2nd Nov 2012 (#)

Interesting. Thank you dear Giorgio.

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author avatar Georgios A.V.
3rd Nov 2012 (#)

Thank you too, sir.

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