Different than before ( when a wife misses her husband and the thingshe used to do )

poemgur1980 By poemgur1980, 24th Nov 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/3vwzv9m0/
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this poem is about the change in a man and how much his wife missed the the way things used to be .

Different than before

id like to hear from you
how much i really mean.
cause i get so lonely more
often without you it seems.

i wish i felt you needed me
or want me like before.
or help me under stand
if you don't love me anymore.

i used to feel special cause
you held me all the time.
i don't know what made things
change or why you cant stop lying.

i miss who you were when you
only starred at me.
tell me what it is that made
us differently.

i look at you and inside i call
you my prince.
that there's no other man id
choose your mine until it ends.

i need to know if you love
me as of now.
before i start to think that
your loving someone else.

you think its Ok to be how
we are .
if you continue this way our
marriage wont get far.

the end

by :rebecca elizabeth pineda

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Changes, Changing Thoughts, Missing You

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author avatar poemgur1980
my name is (Rebecca Elizabeth Jimenez) married name is (Pineda .)
Im 33 yrs old been writing poems since the age of 9 I write about feelings ,love,inspiration,hope all kinds of poetry

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author avatar Retired
24th Nov 2013 (#)

So sad and so tragic when love goes bad ... beautiful words ...

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author avatar poemgur1980
24th Nov 2013 (#)

yes it really hurts when one loves someone so much and the other doesn't realize it till its to late or some just don't notice at all but all one can do is pray and be thankful for the trials god puts in there path

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author avatar LOVERME
24th Nov 2013 (#)

get to talk with him ....
ere tis too late

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author avatar poemgur1980
24th Nov 2013 (#)

no me and my husband are great before was a complete break down thank you so much for caring loverme

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author avatar Williamsji
25th Nov 2013 (#)

QUOTE
i look at you and inside i call
you my prince.
that there's no other man id
choose your mine until it ends.
UNQUOTE
Grief and sorrowfulness depicted well in these words of your bountiful words, Congrats, Regards from WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar Jhon Marshall
25th Nov 2013 (#)

nice poem

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