Disorganized Conscience

Jamesvansteel By Jamesvansteel, 26th Aug 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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A messy room is a messy mind, struggling to put the pieces of life and myself into an acceptable order.

Disorganized Conscience

Calm chords drive past
then blindsided by a Good Winter,
breathing concorde speed
to a final drag.
Clear the vocal ones, laden
with thought and stuck
in the mud of
last pockets checked
gets me through the door.
Scattered on the floor:
bleached sheets and
single page lethargy.
It's representing all
the misconceived
and half-baked
accolades to
some rat king.
Is it a bad thing?
That life is a ballot of
Hitchcock films,
I voted earl gray tea
syllogistic metonymy.

The "Good Winter" at the beginning is a reference to the band Bon Iver, meaning good winter in french. Blindsided is a song by them.


Confusion, Disorganized, Mess, Mind, Morality

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