Distraught Teen

LOVERME By LOVERME, 18th Oct 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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You are as simple as my ego is astound...A young girl is again taken which is not unusual They never listen hence I compose .. in post oblivion

you are as simple as my ego is astound

you are as simple as my ego is astound


you say curtly what others go about round and round …I don't know what sheared the sheen… the shaft unclean…. and if I were you…. I'd have had the one guillotined …but then language is not what I command …tis love only I demand … for you to have a fair share …in this round world...but a bit too square I've found
Wonder if I make sense at all… in other words I'd say to him ...’’’GO TO HELL!

You are as simple as my ego is astound!!!

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Teen Life, Teen Problems, Teenage, Teenage Boy, Teenage Dating, Teenage Girls, Teenage Ideas, Teenage Life, Teenage Love, Teenagers, Teenagers Affair, Teenagers Grownup, Teens

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The one and only LOVERME
Thanks friends for reading me,
its natural VIRGINOUS poetry
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author avatar pohtiongho
19th Oct 2013 (#)

There are indeed a few odd cases which you find people need no opposite sex and they are enjoying a blissful life. Find out how you may attain that level. You need to experience it to believe it.

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Oct 2013 (#)

gayism and lesbianism were ... but now no longer taboos

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author avatar pohtiongho
20th Oct 2013 (#)

Gayism & lesbianism are not the topics I referred to. Meditation practitioners who have attained a certain level enjoy the pleasure which is many times more intense than the sexual pleasure. Non-practitioners won't be able to understand what I am talking about. Just like the kids won't understand what sexual pleasure is . They need to grow up to be able to experience it. Likewise, the pleasure from meditation can only be experienced after a certain amount of practice.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
19th Oct 2013 (#)

Without genuine love the whole act is devoid of true emotions causing emotional misery but some are adept in causing others such harm - siva

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author avatar S. C. Weeks
19th Oct 2013 (#)

I agree with Siva.

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author avatar Mariah
19th Oct 2013 (#)

Well said Siva

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author avatar Mariah
19th Oct 2013 (#)

Well said Siva

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Oct 2013 (#)

glad 4 u 2222222222222

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Oct 2013 (#)

glad for shiva

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Oct 2013 (#)

each one for him ...herself ...
we are now mostly archaic ...the world has drifted geometrically ...
where sex has become like a cup of coffee ...
needed
... but condom thrown casually..
so be it!

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author avatar M G Singh
19th Oct 2013 (#)

Nice poem Loverme. Your poems are interesting

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author avatar Mariah
19th Oct 2013 (#)

..And Madan

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author avatar Mariah
19th Oct 2013 (#)

Your poems are always interesting maestro

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Oct 2013 (#)

but of course ....
when I have such interesting folks walking alongside. thanks maestrolina

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author avatar LOVERME
20th Oct 2013 (#)

but of course ..
when I have such STARRERS Read me too ...
like uuuuuuuuuuuuu

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Oct 2013 (#)

it is a pleasure to meet and share your comments and views and ..
wonderful practical experiences ...

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author avatar LOVERME
20th Oct 2013 (#)

thank u u said that ere

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
19th Oct 2013 (#)

Thought provoking poem.

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Oct 2013 (#)

your own experiences are fore runners ...
Bechhoo how do you do ..
nice to see you

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
19th Oct 2013 (#)

I also agree with Siva , and I must be one of the ' odd ' people which pohtiongho mentions ...but a happy and content one , I might add .
Bless you
Stella ><

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author avatar pohtiongho
20th Oct 2013 (#)

Shella: please read my second comment.

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author avatar LOVERME
20th Oct 2013 (#)

bless u too

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author avatar LOVERME
19th Oct 2013 (#)

stella and all above thank you shall revert soon I'm off tooo

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
19th Oct 2013 (#)

I pray your reverting will be for the good of all dear LOVERME.
May you be at peace my friend .
Bless you.
Stella ><

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author avatar LOVERME
20th Oct 2013 (#)

uuuuuuu 2222222222222222
May you be -------------------------------at peace my friend .

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author avatar Terry Trainor
20th Oct 2013 (#)

A philosopher and a great poet.

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author avatar LOVERME
20th Oct 2013 (#)

your extreme kindness
a multiplex me loverme

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author avatar Carol
20th Oct 2013 (#)

Well your work certainly attracts comments Loverme, well done!

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author avatar LOVERME
20th Oct 2013 (#)

thank you ..
it has taken me 4 years to reach this stage ...
despite the one who at an instant ------
tries to slice --------by now all know ..thanks
Carol ma'am

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
23rd Oct 2013 (#)

Nice piece as always!

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author avatar LOVERME
23rd Oct 2013 (#)

thanks as usual

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author avatar LOVERME
6th Oct 2018 (#)

1092 agreed with me o teens why don't you also listen
You are as simple as my ego is astound...A young girl is again taken which is not unusual They never listen hence I compose .. in post oblivion
you are as simple as my ego is astound

you are as simple as my ego is astound


you say curtly what others go about round and round …I don't know what sheared the sheen… the shaft unclean…. and if I were you…. I'd have had the one guillotined …but then language is not what I command …tis love only I demand … for you to have a fair share …in this round world...but a bit too square I've found
Wonder if I make sense at all… in other words I'd say to him ...’’’GO TO HELL!

You are as simple as my ego is astound

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author avatar LOVERME
7th Dec 2018 (#)

no mercy
they r nice
making money as u and I are keeping Wikis alive
yesterday 1300 PLUS today 800 MINUS READS
SINE CURVE WAVERS

don't u think its Money for Wikis they r earning on our shoulders for free
so be happy till they become extremely wealthy
all is MONEY AND SEX IN THIS LIFE
POETRY BESIDES this is just to satisfy OUR EGO SO don't let go so many love us also

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