Do you know the feeling of being in love?

Lux Raise a shell By Lux Raise a shell, 29th Sep 2010 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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For there is nothing i can do but to love you forever


Have you been in love?

this is what have love done to me...

I don't have any ideas about poetry
but every time I think about you,
out of nowhere, color of words come to express my feelings for you.

I haven't yet experience being in such danger
but every time we're far apart,
I feel like my life is in jeopardy
my heart feels pain and misery.

My love for you is like the four seasons...
It's like the cold winter when we're not together
It's like the spring when we first meet each other
Your smile is like the warm sunshine of the summer
And when we're old and gray, what I see is the beautiful falling leaves of autumn.

I cannot ask you to love me for a lifetime...
we may have troubles and fights,
and I cannot be even a perfect lover
but I assure you that loving you...
is what I can do forever.


Feeling Of Love, Love, Thoughts Of Love

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author avatar Lux Raise a shell
-20 years of age
-i am an enthusiast of novel and other classics... i love to write down my experience and my ideas.. optimistic at all times

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author avatar maftab92
2nd Oct 2010 (#)

Great can write well.

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author avatar mirage
3rd Oct 2010 (#)

Nice....a great lover u r...

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author avatar Denise O
4th Oct 2010 (#)

Very nice. Thank you for sharing. :)

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author avatar Lux Raise a shell
11th Oct 2010 (#)

thank you for all of your comments... i am really surprised... I'll take it as a compliment... thank you very much...

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author avatar Vien Carazkt
14th Nov 2010 (#)

sweet of you!! wish you find true love!

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