Dream World or Reality...if it be so....

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 2nd Sep 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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This will take you on a journey of no return...if you will...yet it also correlates being here and being there..reality and illusion take your pick...and do enjoy

Where...

Floating circles
Headed where
Circumventing space and time
Moving through eternity

How I want to be with them

So often dreary life can be
Endless days
Forgotten nights
Stretching through infinity

One after one they plod
Like unmilked cows
Udders hang low
Onto ground

Illusions

Illusions
Non reality
That sacred
Inside takes place

Accessed by choice
Energy follows thought
Teachings I have learned so well
Put into practice
Silly bitch

That brings a smile to my face
Have fun I do with me
Perhaps why am so solitary
Few people entertaining are

At least the way I want to be

Dream world

A dream world
We live in
Oft filled with monsters
They come and they go
Posing as good ones
It ain't really so
A mile off you smell them
Sulphurous intense
No light around them
Evil they are

Stretching you...

How far stretch elastic
How far will you go
Learning your lessons
Which way to go

Doors open
Then close
Dare you go through
What waits on other side

Perhaps there you will find You
The One you have searched for
Through eternity
Since first you fell
Arms open wide
To embrace you
Those of heavenly kind....

and so it is

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar HacBao
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

Theme of the poem is very selective audience.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

I know....

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author avatar snerfu
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

very unusual again cnwriter

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author avatar HacBao
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

Sorry, but I do not understand what is meant by your comment? Can you explain it to me.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

I know...thank you snerfu

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

takes too long so just enjoy..

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author avatar Helen Thomas
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

Another one of your beautiful poems. Thanks for sharing ~ Carolina. Blessings!

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author avatar spirited
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

Dreariness and heaviness go together. If we hang onto the milk in our udders we will experience both. LOL

That's what I took from your poem.

Different people will get different meanings, beautiful in its mind gripping descriptions again, carolina

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

thanks much spirited...

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author avatar Retired
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

I love to travel and often wish I didn't have to return to where I started. But that is where my family has its anchors. However, my wife is becoming increasingly interested in the way I used to be - footloose and fancy free. Go where you like when you like. And for that you have to have to be an adventurer, a risk taker and a dreamer. Your poem says it all.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

many thanks Mike...and yes...just do it....and roam the world around...

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

I like Mike's comment. Adventurers may we all be -- some physically, some with the mind alone.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

and why not do all...you can you know....

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author avatar Retired
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

Wonderful. The last stanza is exquisitely sweet. And adding beautiful Nina's soulful rendition is genius. Thanks for this, Carolina.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Sep 2014 (#)

and thank you from my heart Susan..your comments fill my heart with joy...

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author avatar Retired
4th Sep 2014 (#)

Yes, "how far will you go"? If you stay anchored, you'll never know what awaits you, whether in dreams or reality. Don't pass up the opportunity for sweet joy, nor be afraid of demons.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
6th Sep 2014 (#)

never! always keep on keeping on...just as I have always done...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
6th Sep 2014 (#)

Impacts all - your thoughts so exquisitely expressed, Carolina. Everything is a choice in life but we should find balance within our comfort levels - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
6th Sep 2014 (#)

yes indeed harmony and balance have always been important for me...

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author avatar RBB1010
7th Sep 2014 (#)

Oft times all we have is a dream, a hope and oh ..in times of hardness and suffering these dreams and hopes leaves us with an oasis of inner peace, thanks.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
7th Sep 2014 (#)

yes they do my friend...

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
9th Sep 2014 (#)

With the seal of the house , filled with excellence in every word and tender loving care , courtesy of own one and only Carito, lovely piece bonita, cheers! XOXO

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
9th Sep 2014 (#)

ta ever so...

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author avatar Kingwell
15th Sep 2014 (#)

Yet another of your beautiful poems.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
15th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you so much...

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