Dreams of Pain

Shaunak By Shaunak, 13th Jan 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/t5loe4yd/
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Another Poem of Pain and love. A poem about lonely dreams and the pain the heart feels when its alone

Dreams of Pain

I am lonely,
there is no one close,
no one sees the pain
as a tear rolls slowly down my cheek.

My sorrow over flowing,
I hold my breath in counts
It is you that reminds me to inhale
It is you that gave an ounce
of love
of care
of devotion
You share
The best parts of you
with the worst of me
and still I remain
your beauty beyond the eyes can see.

i wonder I wonder for a moment
if all this is just a dream
if I’ll feel that way again
I try not to think of you,
but when I close my eyes,
I see nothing but you.
you are in my dreams
But as i open my eyes,
You are just a distant dream on a midnights eve
somewhere far from acknowledged leaves.

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author avatar Shaunak
Hi, i am Shaunak. I am a Technology freak who loves writing Poetry and Short stories. I also write about movies, music, business and anything that i find interesting.

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author avatar Retired
14th Jan 2012 (#)

Close your eyes and dream of love,
You will see it flow from Above.
Making it pure and loved in sense,
Like a beautiful flower with incense.

Gently kissing within your mind,
To feel the loneliness unwind.
For it then transforms into gratitude,
To fill the love and change attitude.

For in our dreams we are near and close,
Scent of beauty, my Adonis Rose.
Moving all mountains that cause the pain,
The intrepid torture to drive insane

Bringing the peace and quiet tranquil calm,
Beauty of light the great magical charm.
To feel the love that flows to the see,
Its no longer loneliness but solitude to me,

By Anisha Achankunju (C) 14th January 2012

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author avatar Shaunak
14th Jan 2012 (#)

Great Reply Anisha. I really liked your poem. thanks for the comment

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author avatar Vernazoa
30th Jan 2012 (#)

Why do you try to steal other writers thunder. I think it is not necessary.

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author avatar Karol
14th Jan 2012 (#)

Nice Article. Though its very sad also. :(
I am still in tears after reading this :(

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author avatar Buzz
14th Jan 2012 (#)

Romantic and enchanting, Shaunak. Thanks for the share.

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author avatar Sheila Newton
14th Jan 2012 (#)

Pain is awful - but emotional pain is the worst thing ever.

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author avatar ShaneCold
15th Jan 2012 (#)

Wonderful

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author avatar Ivyevelyn, R.S.A.
15th Jan 2012 (#)

Shaunak: Your poem is powerful and written so well that I can only respond with the following:
Emotional and physical pain are so well known to me,
God and Wikinutters help me carry on,
Now there is no need to feel the pain of being alone.
Your friend, Ivyevelyn.

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author avatar Shaunak
15th Jan 2012 (#)

Thanks Ivyevelyn

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author avatar Retired
15th Jan 2012 (#)

Poignant poem.

Just as buds have to burst for blossoms to bloom, pain ripens the heart....and the pendulum ill swing again to joy.

warm welcome to Wikinut

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author avatar Delicia Powers
15th Jan 2012 (#)

Beautifully expressed...

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author avatar Denise O
20th Jan 2012 (#)

Such a sad poem, you emotions come through just beautifully. Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar GV Rama Rao
23rd Jan 2012 (#)

Fine poem. Just remember to capitalize I.

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author avatar GV Rama Rao
23rd Jan 2012 (#)

Fine poem. Just remember to capitalize I.

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author avatar Vernazoa
30th Jan 2012 (#)

This is beautiful and full of deep emotions, I can relate to this. Thank you for reminding me what it feels like to remember a love. My guy is dying from lung cancer. I think I know where you are coming from.

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author avatar Nancy
10th Feb 2012 (#)

i like the idea behind the poem. good job, keep writing. you've got talent.

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