"Dynamic Duo" The gang goes underground

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Molly, Robert and Milly are walking down a long dark hallway to the basement. They are in search of a chop shop that they believe is underground. The air smells damp with mildew and Milly believes they are in danger. Sally remained outside in the alley way. She has a whistle to alert them of any trouble. Milly is starting to get a headache. She doesn't like damp places. She has allergies.

Going underground

Robert was now leading the way into the underground basement. Molly was right behind him walking down the dark and musty corridor. Milly was walking a little slower because her eyes were starting to water, and she felt like she was going to sneeze. What if she did sneeze and alert the bad guys running this operation? If that happened they'd all be goners. They'd never be able to explain what they were doing in an abandoned building in the middle of the night. Milly thought that she should have taken some allergy medicine before she started out on this mission. The problem with that though was that it made her tired. She'd end up sleeping on the job.

The end of the line

As they neared the end of the corridor Robert motioned for everyone to stop. This was going to be very tricky. If they walked around the corner and came face to face with a real chop shop, things would start getting very interesting. They were going to have to stay undercover if they wanted to stay alive. The guys who ran these operations were known for their attitudes. When Robert quietly looked around the corner he noticed that there was a door. He wasn't sure what was on the other side of the door but most likely it was trouble with a capital T.

The discovery

Robert noticed that there was a small window at the top of the door. He motioned for Molly to help him move a discarded brick over by the door. He wanted to get a good look inside the room. When they got the brick in place Robert got up on it and looked through the window. He let out a deep sigh and that's when Milly knew they were in trouble. Molly stood quietly waiting for Robert to speak, at this particular moment he was running the show. Molly had been right all along, her intuition was right on the money. They had a real life chop shop in their very own city. The only thing was that Robert couldn't figure out how the burglaries and the chop shop were connected. That was going to have to take some thinking on his part.

Sally runs into trouble

In the mean time Sally was watching the building from the alley way and it was starting to rain. She decided to go over and stand by the dumpster to try to stay out of the rain. She had the whistle on a rope around her neck. At the end of the alley she saw headlights coming toward the building. That was not a good sign. The car slowed and came to a stop in front of the building. Sally crawled under the dumpster to remain out of sight. It was disgusting under the dumpster. It smelled like dead fish or something comparable to that. She couldn't blow the whistle because it would alert the bad guys to her location. Sally didn't know what to do. The guy on the passenger side walked up to the door and unlocked it. He entered the building. The driver stayed in the car which meant Sally had to stay under the dumpster. Robert, Molly and Milly were definitely in trouble now.

To be continued...

"The Dynamic Duo" Molly and Milly are back in Jersey

"The Dynamic Duo" A plan of action

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Abandoned Building, Alley Way, Basement, Corridor, Danger, Underground, Whistle

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I'm a mother and a grandmother. I love to write and be creative. If I can make one person smile I've done what I set out to do.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
5th Aug 2015 (#)

Thank you Steve so much for the moderation.

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author avatar brendamarie
5th Aug 2015 (#)

Nancy, love the story. I can't wait for the next post.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
5th Aug 2015 (#)

brendamarie, thank you so much for the awesome comment. I'm so glad you like the story.

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author avatar Retired
5th Aug 2015 (#)

Sometimes we just have to get away from it all and go underground. After that....we tune in to your next post!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
5th Aug 2015 (#)

LeRain, you are the best! Thank you so much for following Molly and Milly. I loved your comment.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
5th Aug 2015 (#)

I think it is now Dad's turn to save them in the nick of time.

Sally cannot be blamed as she is caught between a rock and a hard place. If she blows the whistle she is a goner - if she does not, others are history!

Cannot wait to read further Nancy as it coming to a face-off between the two and four legged species - siva

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
5th Aug 2015 (#)

Siva, absolutely awesome comment. Sally is definitely between a rock and a hard spot. How the gang is going to get out of this mess I just don't know. I'm thinking just maybe Molly should have told Dad what they were going to do. This could get really bad. We shall see!

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author avatar snerfu
5th Aug 2015 (#)

Maybe it is medicines -- they sometimes smell so weird. And Milly definitely must keep the water out of her eyes. What happened to the Mace?

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
5th Aug 2015 (#)

Snerfu, thanks for the awesome comment. I think before Milly goes on these stake outs she should take some allergy medicine but then she'd get tired and fall asleep. They carry their mace around their necks because it's easier that way, but I think they are going to be outnumbered. It's not looking good for them, and poor Sally is hidden under a dumpster. She is simply mortified by the whole experience. She's probably going to need counseling if she gets our alive.

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
5th Aug 2015 (#)

I like the way you lead us so easily into each section of the story ...in such a way we can follow as if we are part of the characters ...The good ones of course !
Well done yet again dear Nancy for holding our attention .
God bless you today
Stella ><

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
5th Aug 2015 (#)

Stella, I simply cannot express how happy I am that you continue to follow Milly and Molly along on their path to rid the world of the bad guys. When I write about Molly and Milly I feel like I'm part of the group. It's so much fun but right now I think they are in over their heads. We shall see. Blessings to you today and always.

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author avatar rafiyanto
5th Aug 2015 (#)

good article nancy :)

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
5th Aug 2015 (#)

rafiyanto, thank you so much for following Molly and Milly and for the awesome comment

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author avatar Shamarie
5th Aug 2015 (#)

Great chapter, Nancy! You're doing a great job making the reader feel like he or she is in the story. I wonder how the gang is going to get out of this mess! Congrats on the star page!!!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
5th Aug 2015 (#)

Shamarie, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and for following Molly and Milly. I'm so glad that you like this story. They are in a mess. We shall see how they get out of this one.

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author avatar Retired
8th Aug 2015 (#)

Sorry to be MIA. Terrific chapter! Thank you.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
8th Aug 2015 (#)

Jessica, thank you so much for the comment. You are the best!

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author avatar Carol Roach
11th Aug 2015 (#)

what is a chop shop, a tip in good writing is if you are using local terms to explain them if your audience will be reading from all over the world

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
11th Aug 2015 (#)

Carol, thanks for continuing to follow Molly and Milly and thank you for the tip.

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author avatar Kingwell
9th Sep 2015 (#)

Good chapter Nancy. Keep it coming. Blessings.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
9th Sep 2015 (#)

Kingwell, it's so nice to see your name on my pages. I always think there's my friend. Thank you for being so kind to me. Blessings to you!

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