Erotic Fantasy- A Product Of Teenage Infatuation (Experience of a girl)

Funom Makama By Funom Makama, 9th Nov 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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After publishing one of my Poems/article: Just in a split second-The sexuality of the lady in red, one of my friends told me he has always seen the gift of erotic and sensual articles in me. Well, this spur me to try another one and here it is. I hope you do enjoy it

nude, cold and blessed

Gently lying on my bed with my slickly Pink Pajamas,
I fell asleep like a peaceful baby,
then the windows opened in complete excitement,
and the seas breezed in like a stampede,
raising my night dress from legs to Breasts
leaving me nude, cold but blessed,
then came this guy with a bad intention crested on his chest,
I could not picture his face but could see him so well.

cupped breast

As his tongue kiss and lick,
high voltage current crossed my cheek.
the wet flexible muscle moved quite oblique,
then every action from now on seem to click,
causing sensation so quick,
I suddenly became helpless, weak and sick.

He trade his plight on site,
causing hormonal sparks to ignite,
not considering if he is wrong or right,
becoming more real and clean in my sight,
my increasing arousal, making the moment bright.

His groans made the feeling mutual,
producing pleasure beyond the normal ritual,
and making his movement on me so casual,
cupped my Breast to make the feeling factual,
squeezing them like a newly baked dough,
wheezing sounds emerging from my passionate screams,
and making my freezing feet jerk as he plays with the nipples.

I am grossly susceptible!

Then down the road he goes to my shin,
spreading my legs made the sensation immeasurable,
the gradual heat from his romancing hand, simply unspeakable,
summed up with his commanding domination like a constable,
began an erotic scene so irresistible,
and since I am already grossly susceptible,
I yielded to his masculine touch as though already compatible.
Steadily and slowly, he drives through to my thighs like a convertible,
causing a body rhythm and sensation so explicable.

Caressing them gently as I wished,
reaching the focal point made me feel accomplished,
hoping to treat my secret garden with a mood so selfish,
making it his possession and ecstasy fully nourished,
complimented with a fantasy already established

As he was about penetrating like a beam,
I already reached the next level and ready to swim,
as real as this experience may seem,
I immediately woke up to realize it was just a dream.

Tags

Constable, Convertible, Current, Domination, Hormone, Irresistible, Muscles, Pajamas, Sensation, Sparks, Susceptible, Voltage

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author avatar Funom Makama
A medical Practitioner and a passionate writer. A proud published Author of 2 books, more than 2,000 articles online and 500 Poems!
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author avatar Retired
10th Nov 2011 (#)

Well done...that was erotic...keep up the good work....

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author avatar Funom Makama
10th Nov 2011 (#)

Thanks a lot.

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author avatar pretty_writer
10th Nov 2011 (#)

God!~~~ Do excellent and heavenly Poets as this still exist? Where and how did you get the insight from? This is really good and I will read it out loud to my guy in a very cool evening.

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author avatar Funom Makama
10th Nov 2011 (#)

wooooow!~~~ All these compliments for me? I am feeling on top of the world right now. Thanks pretty!

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author avatar LOVERME
10th Nov 2011 (#)

Wow erotica as it bursts equally

Black just lovely
as Smiths work with fire
and the darkness becomes white ,
when the furnace is opened hence BLACK

No problems, i ain't much of a poet ,
even though i have composed only 7000 poems May God bless wikinut and triond and the lady
for small mercies
i enjoy now reading you all and drop a line here and there ,
as i have no means of communication else ,thanks

Life is always colorful
More so in the darkness,
Which is black
Under the spread of sheets when love is packed

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author avatar LOVERME
10th Nov 2011 (#)

such compatible sexuality happens only in ones dream, otherwise in reality is some cumming some going and the levels are different
at different times
lovely clean erotica yours just cumming poetry keep it up

Black just lovely
as Smiths work with fire
and the darkness becomes white ,
when the furnace is opened hence BLACK

No problems, i ain't much of a poet ,
even though i have composed only 7000 poems May God bless wikinut and triond and the lady
for small mercies
i enjoy now reading you all and drop a line here and there ,
as i have no means of communication else ,thanks

Life is always colorful
More so in the darkness,
Which is black
Under the spread of sheets when love is packed

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author avatar LOVERME
10th Nov 2011 (#)

REEDIT PLEASE

BY FUNAM MAKAMA WIKINUT POETRY
Such compatible sexuality happens only in ones dream, otherwise in reality is some cumming some going and the levels are different
At different times
Lovely clean erotica yours just cumming poetry keep it up

Black just lovely
As Smiths work with fire
And the darkness becomes white,
When the furnace is opened hence BLACK

No problems, I isn’t much of a poet,
Even though I have composed only 7000 poems May God bless wiki nut and trend and the lady
For small mercies
I enjoy now reading you all and drop a line here and there,
As I have no means of communication else, thanks

Life is always colorful
More so in the darkness,
Which is black?
Under the spread of sheets when love is packed

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author avatar LOVERME
10th Nov 2011 (#)

REREAD it and yes you could have added Maryln's MONROES skirt flowing snap to match with the commencement of ur dream. u can return ur
msg here or at my poem black is a colour ..
nice lady really erotic

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author avatar LOVERME
10th Nov 2011 (#)

READ TRIOND

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author avatar Funom Makama
10th Nov 2011 (#)

Thanks LOVERME, where should I read your poem? In triond or here, on wikinut?

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author avatar LOVERME
11th Nov 2011 (#)

mostly here
6000 in Triond as u know.....Ask JohnnyDod he will show u the path ..

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author avatar Retired
19th Nov 2011 (#)

Honey!!! You make Johnny sound like God and even go to confession box with him!!! Did you tell him about the poor wife and three kids at home whilst you philander around during office hours???And act innocent after that???

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author avatar LOVERME
12th Nov 2011 (#)

reread ur lovely poem
more ought to read and enjoy

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author avatar angel_jenny
12th Nov 2011 (#)

great writing and believable :) better at poetry than myself lol I just rhyme couplets! Look forward to reading more x

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author avatar Songbird B
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Wow! This is pretty erotic, Funom, mine is very tame in comparison! lol..Obviously on a similar wavelength. This is beautifully done, and though erotic, not crude or obscene...Really nice work my friend. I am still trawling through a 300 plus backlog of messages, so will get to post on your other work as and when I can.. Thank you for looking in on me...

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author avatar Ram Bansal
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Nice erotic feelings..

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author avatar Funom Makama
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Thanks friends... Your comments make me feel so warm!

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author avatar Ivyevelyn, R.S.A.
12th Nov 2011 (#)

Funom: You do very well in this area of poetry. I think I will see what I can do!

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author avatar Funom Makama
12th Nov 2011 (#)

(head swelling~~~head swelling)!
Thanks a lot Ivy

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author avatar Retired
19th Nov 2011 (#)

Have to say it is sensational and graphic!!!! Will reserve the rest of my comment... But a good fantasy....

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author avatar Funom Makama
19th Nov 2011 (#)

the rest of your comment? I would love to know them irrespective of how it is. One reason I am your biggest fan and most passionate friend is, I feel how passionate and sincere you are from your expressions and I feel ur complete comments would be helpful. So I am waiting.

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author avatar pretty_writer
20th Nov 2011 (#)

A great Piece and a raw Talent. Keep it up Dr. Funom Makama

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author avatar Priscilla tawai
24th Feb 2012 (#)

u dey make me go gaga............nice

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author avatar Gracious Grace
24th Feb 2012 (#)

woooooooooooooooooow.......i was speechless after reading this, all my hopes were high only to found out it was a dream but i must say this is lovely, i mean its really good

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author avatar Funom Makama
24th Feb 2012 (#)

Thanks girls... Its not her fault!

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author avatar Barine Nakwaasah
2nd Mar 2012 (#)

no be small erotic feeling be this ooo!

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author avatar Funom Makama
3rd Mar 2012 (#)

thanks and welcome to wikinut

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