archjvnesta By archjvnesta, 15th Jan 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
Posted in Wikinut>Writing>Poetry

IN KENYA it illegal to take beer after 11pm. I Conceptualized THIS on Thursday 5th sep 2013 after being caught red handed at a drinking joint past using a metaphor of a priest to represent the policeman who caught us and forced a marriage with me to another pal(police chains) a nice poem i guess for anyone understanding poetry.1st draft


Past 11pm it was
(Fast it all was)
Fast the priests did come
With two altar boys by his side
By the robes you could tell
By the voice all was clear
I alone blesses the wine
I alone allows for the mass
For thy mess give a offering
No forgiveness but only indulgence
{oh ,I thought you bless not condemn}
Forgive us father, we knew not our sin
A marriage ceremony is all you need
Your bride for you I will choose
Joined wedding rings he already had
By my right hand with the brides left
We all were now one
None could now put asunder
Pitiful were looks we all got
By his curse our hell journey began
With much hope Bishop would do stop


Kenya, Priest, Rave, Wine

Meet the author

author avatar archjvnesta
An architect by profesion.just out of interest is on poetry but majorly on issues relating to politics,philosophy,renewable energy and social ills.hope you enjoy my reads.

Share this page

moderator johnnydod moderated this page.
If you have any complaints about this content, please let us know


author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
15th Jan 2014 (#)

Interesting metaphor, nice poem - siva

Reply to this comment

author avatar Legend
15th Jan 2014 (#)


Reply to this comment

Add a comment
Can't login?