Fear!

Neha Dwivedi  By Neha Dwivedi , 19th Aug 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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fear, fear, oh dear
blubbering out in the form of tears !

fear

i fear of losing myself, losing all those whom i love
something which is getting on my nerve
every morning i get up with some kind of fear
fear rolling out of my eyes in the form of tears
tears which cannot be stopped nor shown
as it will undermine the fact that i am grown
grown enough to not let others get effected by my problems
sway them away as if they are curls
little do i have the confidence of telling it to others
forcing me to wake up every mid night for taking cold showers
do they really sooth me , nope!
but at least they prevent me from becoming a show
all i do is look up to the god...
asking for little help , this is what i sought
hope he will help me like always
be with me and never let me part ways!

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Faith, Family, Fear, Fear Of Death, Fear Of Intimacy, Fear Of Pain, Fear Of The Dark, Fear Of The Unknown, Fearful Life, Fears, Friends, Friendship

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
Hello people ! I am a student whose aim is to become a professional writer .I love writing all kinds of stuff but what interests me the most is poetry . Hope you all enjoy my writing (Neha Dwivedi )

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author avatar Songbird B
20th Aug 2011 (#)

Unspoken fears can have such a hold over us...Well expressed Geeta..

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
20th Aug 2011 (#)

you are right Songbird...thanks a lot for stopping by and posting your comment!

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author avatar Buzz
20th Aug 2011 (#)

That was lovely poetry, geeta, my dear. Cheer up:)

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
20th Aug 2011 (#)

yeah i will...thanks a lot Buzz for your support!

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author avatar Sheila Newton
20th Aug 2011 (#)

Fantastic poem. Words unsaid do make for stressful situations. Remember your capital 'I''s though. I'm such a nag, aren't I?!!

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
20th Aug 2011 (#)

no... thanks a lot for making me aware of my mistakes....

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author avatar poetic2984
22nd Aug 2011 (#)

Yes what a thing is fear- good share- Keep it up. Thanks for your comment

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
22nd Aug 2011 (#)

thanks Poetic2984....i really appreciate it a lot!

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author avatar D in The Darling
22nd Aug 2011 (#)

Everyone makes one's own fears.
Face them and they'll bother you no more!

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
23rd Aug 2011 (#)

perhaps you are right...thanks for posting your comment!

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author avatar Carol Kinsman
23rd Aug 2011 (#)

Fear can be a very powerful thing if we allow it to be. I agree with D.....It is important to face our fears. Nice poem, Geeta.

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author avatar Phoenix Montoya
23rd Aug 2011 (#)

I lost my parents two years ago geeta, both of them the same year. The thing is we can never prevent partings or deaths. What we must do is to love and appreciate them while they are still living. Fear is a natural thing but acceptance can free us from it. Good poem my friend.

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author avatar ppruel
23rd Aug 2011 (#)

Naturally we feel it - and it is good. A saying says "Life without fear is hopeless" so we need it...Nice poem. Love it.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
23rd Aug 2011 (#)

thank you ppruel....

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author avatar Tim Crosswell
28th Aug 2011 (#)

good one! :)

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
19th Dec 2011 (#)

thanks...

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