Fear Of My Life !

A K Rao By A K Rao, 31st Jul 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2_pft6ja/
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I Often used to feel if my life will be purposeful or not when I was young! This is the poem written when I was in my early twenties.

Oasis Like My Life!



While thinking that

‘Remote Oasis’ like my life

Is not getting consecrated

To any lost vagabond

Of the Desert,

Weeping Heart!

My Heart

Weeps silently.

If the tears will

Dilute my blood

Flowing through the Heart

Slowly

And all my blood

Will get replaced by

The tears

Unknown One!

I am afraid that

The replaced tears

Will soon kill

Me of anoxia

And I have to leave

The World as

An Unknown One

At an unknown place.



PS: The photos used in this poem are taken from Google Search! I sincerely convey my Thanks!

Tags

Anoxia, Desert, Heart, Life, Oasis, Tears, Vagabond

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author avatar A K Rao
I am an Equnie Vet by profession specialised in Thoroughbreds!

Writing is my passion. Have been a free Lance Journalist and Cartoonist in late80's and early 90's in Local and National News Papers of India.
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author avatar bharathiyar
31st Jul 2012 (#)

A very good Poem sir.
I don't think it is good to go out of this world as unknown one.

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author avatar A K Rao
31st Jul 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot dear Bharathi for the encouagement!

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author avatar norlaw1935
31st Jul 2012 (#)

Very good and great pictures.

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author avatar A K Rao
31st Jul 2012 (#)

Thanks Dear Norlaw for reading and leaving a comment!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
31st Jul 2012 (#)

oh dear A K put a smile on your face now weeping is all over...thank you anyway..

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author avatar A K Rao
31st Jul 2012 (#)

That is true dear Cnwriter, so nice of you to remind me that now that is over! Thanks for the encouraging comment!

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author avatar Delicia Powers
31st Jul 2012 (#)

very deep feelings...a poem of great longings...

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author avatar A K Rao
1st Aug 2012 (#)

Thanks Dear Delicia for reading and commenting!

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
1st Aug 2012 (#)

I think everyone worries often where their life is taking them to. But the best way is to take every day as it comes and make the most of it: Live and enjoy. As I convey often, a bigger problem solves many smaller, lingering ones! Dear Rao, I am sure your worries have been misplaced and you are having a ball of a time now! siva

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author avatar A K Rao
2nd Aug 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot dear Sva sir! I agree wit you and fortunately I have crossed thise obstacles! In spite of knowing the facts of the life it is human tendency to worry about the future and in the rat race of remaining at the top one always suffer from such worries! Once again thanks for such a meaningful comment as ever!

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author avatar Retired
1st Aug 2012 (#)

I like this- thank you for sharing! Well done!

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author avatar A K Rao
3rd Aug 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot dear Adam for reading and commenting!

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author avatar stevetheblogger
1st Aug 2012 (#)

Rao wonderful sentiments and written while still very young I have a tremendous amount of respect for poets something I have nether mastered and you guys make it look so easy.
Best Wishes
Steve

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author avatar A K Rao
5th Aug 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot dear Steve for your lovely commented, I am really delighted to read your comment! Once again Thanks a lot!

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author avatar Sandralee
4th Aug 2012 (#)

Awesome superb I am intrigued for more of your work

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author avatar A K Rao
7th Aug 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot dear Sandra for your encouragement! God bless!

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author avatar Melinda Bocook
9th Aug 2012 (#)

I just really liked this read, thank you for your share.

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author avatar A K Rao
9th Aug 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot dear Melinda for your appreciation and kind compliment!

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author avatar M G Singh
12th Aug 2012 (#)

Nice poem AK

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author avatar A K Rao
17th Aug 2012 (#)

Thanks dear Madan for the comment!

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author avatar yugasini
17th Aug 2012 (#)

hi A K Rao,

nice poem, congratulations on your submission.

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author avatar A K Rao
17th Aug 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot for your encouraging comment dear Yugasini!

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author avatar Retired
22nd Aug 2012 (#)

So true and nice poem.. :)

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author avatar A K Rao
22nd Aug 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot dear Dharmesh!

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author avatar Teila
25th Aug 2012 (#)

Excellent job on this, enjoyed!

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author avatar A K Rao
9th Sep 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot dear Teila for your lovely comment!

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author avatar deepa venkitesh
9th Sep 2012 (#)

great poem sir

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author avatar A K Rao
9th Sep 2012 (#)

Thanks a lot for your encouragement dear Deepa!

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author avatar Ptrikha
18th Mar 2013 (#)

Great poem, and well choosen words.

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